Young Writers Society

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Welcome to my Tea Party!
I'm your host, tea, here to help you calm down, and get a review!

I can review your:
Short Stories
Individual Chapters
Poems
Scripts
Lyrics
Basically Most Things.

I am not a good source to review your:
Full Novels (With what attention span?)
Essays (Ion know anyone with an essay but regardless)
or heavy sexual items or anything with graphic depictions of gore.

With that taken care of, here's our menu for this party!

Mint Tea

Your run of the mill review, nothing special. It will be medium length.

Matcha

A short, sweet, review. Talks very vaguely about the work.

Earl Grey

A long, in depth review. Talks very specifically about the work. (Will take some time to do,)

Looseleaf

No options you like? Make your own custom tea!

Milk Base

Makes the review more concise, want something answered? Add a milk base!

Honey

No criticism in your review. Period.

that's it!

Hi tea! Im not quite sure how these things work. but i love it if you reviewed either of my chapters from my nano novel. I shall link the first one here :https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/LadyMysterio/Chapter-One-Donut-Crumbs-156584

Im trying to improve it as much as possible, so id love a nice Earl Grey!
I will also add a milk base for description! I'm a dialogue lover so i struggle with description.

The second chapter does have a slight mention of a wound on the main character's shoulder, I noticed you said no graphic descriptions of gore. Its not super intense. but i thought id add a note about that

@LadyMysterio I'll get on that right away! Note that this might take 1-2 days as the tea takes time to steep.

AH OH MY GOD @LadyMysterio IM SO SORRY FOR FORGETTING :/

Hi, wondering if you could review a piece of mine called The Reckoning- it’s a major first draft for two battle scenes/ a death scene from a book I’m writing. Its a long read, and I appreciate there’s some stuff in there you might not want to read, but I would love to have some feedback on what I can do to improve it if that’s alright with you.
An earl grey would be great if you only want to review part of it, I’m cool with that too- if you could let me know which bit.
Thanks!

@humblebard1 @.@ oh my that is quite long-- i might have to take a few weeks to actually analyze it-- is that ok?

Of course- would you rather do a part of it? I don’t mind how big a section haha sorry

it's okay :3 i'll try to do as much as i can !

thank you so so much! Please, take as much time as you need

Howdy, Herbal! I was wondering if I could get a spot of Earl Gray for the second chapter of "The Witch of the Rotten Borough."

Edit: forgot to add the link, whoops -> The Witch of the Rotten Borough, Chapter Two

alrighty!

Hey, can I request an Earl Grey for all the chapters of Nine I have written so far? Some of them are short, while the recent ones are longer, so it might take some time. You can make your reviews as long as you want and you can get as detailed as you want and pick out any nitpicks that come across your mind.

My latest chapter:-

Death and Destruction [Ch. V, Nine]

i can try @TheRebel2007! i've consumed in outside of YWS things, but it'll get to you i promise!

February, 1775 – Scotchtown Plantation

Please. I’m mainly interested how the characters connect with the reader. Thanks!