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Wed Jul 05, 2017 3:29 am
confetti says...



Hey fellow writers!

I have way too much free time this summer, so send me your prose pieces (short stories are preferred, but I'll check out anything non-poetry) and I'll give them a solid, helpful critique.

Cheers!
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Tue Sep 12, 2017 6:32 am
kostia says...



Hello there I just uploaded an alternative beginning for my novel. It's really not long, just the first draft. Any suggestions are more than welcome. I would appreciate it if you could take a look.

war and his eyes (alternative beginning)

Thank you in advance.
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Sat Sep 16, 2017 4:33 am
confetti says...



@kostia Just posted your review! Hope it was helpful
"So the writer who breeds more words than he needs, is making a chore for the reader who reads."
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