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Wed Apr 16, 2014 10:33 pm
deleted30 says...



Title says it all. :D

Step right up and get'chya literary works reviewed, free o' charge! (In other words, no need to review anything of mine in return.)

I will review basically anything. Yep, that's right! So if you have a bunch of chapters that have been sadly neglected, I'll be more than happy to take a look at 'em. :D

My reviewing style: I try to be as honest as possible, but polite at the same time. In other words, you don't have to worry about getting a soul-crushing remark from this girl. I'm basically incapable of being mean in my reviews. ;) Oh, and I think I'm pretty helpful, too, judging by the comments the authors have given me.

Guess that's all. NOW GIVE ME SOME LINKS! :smt003

Updated as of February 25th, 2017: Closed for the time being, since I won't be too active for a bit. I'll reopen once I return.
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Thu Apr 17, 2014 12:10 pm
Certainly Love says...



Hello! I would love a review on my novel Kiss the Damsel, chapter one and two. If you have time. I would also love you to review The Angelon Kingdom. Thanks! <3http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=10705http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=110496
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Thu Apr 17, 2014 12:38 pm
DrFeelGood says...



Hi! I always wanted a review from you.
Spoiler! :
I have read many of your reviews and loved them :D.


The Perfect Thief (Revised) Chapter 1 I have also written a prologue for it, but I am planning to rewrite the prologue. So you can just read the first chapter. Thanks :P
  





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Thu Apr 17, 2014 5:22 pm
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Great, I'll get right on those! And aww, thank you, Gaurav. :D
  





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Sun Apr 20, 2014 7:29 pm
retrodisco666 says...



Shotgun kisses.

If you could review this I would love it :D Thank you so much
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Sun Apr 20, 2014 7:47 pm
deleted30 says...



retrodisco666 wrote:http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=110672#c463079

If you could review this I would love it :D Thank you so much


Reviewed! :smt003
  





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Tue Apr 22, 2014 8:58 pm
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Hey there! You seem really nice, and I was wondering if you could review the prologue of my novel for me?

It's called Winter Asylum. I'll give you the link ;)

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=110734
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Wed Apr 23, 2014 5:42 am
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MysteryMe wrote:Hey there! You seem really nice, and I was wondering if you could review the prologue of my novel for me?

It's called Winter Asylum. I'll give you the link ;)

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=110734


Reviewed! And thanks for the compliment. :smt003
  





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Sat Apr 26, 2014 1:18 am
DrFeelGood says...



Hi! I have posted the second chapter of my story. Hope you like it :D The Perfect Thief Chapter 2
  





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Sat Apr 26, 2014 2:22 am
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Gaurav009 wrote:Hi! I have posted the second chapter of my story. Hope you like it :D The Perfect Thief Chapter 2


I'll try to get to it tomorrow during Review Day. :D
  





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Sat Apr 26, 2014 3:38 am
queerelves says...



Do you think you could check out the prologue of my novel? Azazel: Prologue
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Sat Apr 26, 2014 3:41 am
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queerelves wrote:Do you think you could check out the prologue of my novel? Azazel: Prologue


Certainly! I'll take a look at it tomorrow. :D
  





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Sat Apr 26, 2014 3:43 am
queerelves says...



Lucrezia wrote:
queerelves wrote:Do you think you could check out the prologue of my novel? Azazel: Prologue


Certainly! I'll take a look at it tomorrow. :D


Thank you! :D
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Thu May 01, 2014 3:00 am
Hadj says...



This already has a few reviews, but Children

Thanks! :D
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