Title: Angler (The Novel)
Genre: General Fiction Novels
What I would like you to look at: Please give me feedback on characters and voice.
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*gulps* I have to warn you that this piece is the first chapter of the novel that I am trying to get published. It is 4,832 words long. Sorry it's so long, but your review is greatly appreciated.
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