So, here's yet another 5 minute poem. It could use a lot of help, so please comment with your suggestions!
I asked you not to say those words.
They do not bode me well.
I asked you not to tell me that,
It removes my protective shell.
Please don’t say those words again,
For I do not understand.
I cannot fight what I cannot learn,
Or for what I have not planned.
Take back that thing you said to me,
You know of what I speak.
Take it back before I break,
And wind up six feet deep.
Do you know what it means?
To say the things you do….
Do you understand the weight,
You’ve put upon us two?
You know I want to say it back,
I know you know I do,
But as my life-time enemy,
I cannot say I love you.
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