I'm about 2/5 done with Fiddlesticks. That is to say, I divide it into five sections, and what I'm posting now is the first two parts. It's not marked as that in the script though, so don't put to much stock into that.
This is an idea more then two years in the making, when a couple of friends and I made up a goofy religion called Fiddlesticks. I never knew where they came up with the name, but that idea morphed into a play. I've written this part again and again and again. Right now, I'm pleased enough to let it see some light, without being embarrassed. What I really need now is help. I'd be incredibly grateful, to anyone who crits this.
Synopsis:
Seven strangers meet in a fallout shelter, the only known survivors of a nuclear holocaust. As they come to terms with the catastrophe that has engulfed the world below, they begin to realize the unique position they're now in. They take it as their responsibility to remake the world...
Here's what I want to know: (of course, other comments are more than welcome)
+ Is the dialogue believable?
+ Is the argument believable?
+ What do you think will happen to
Fiddlesticks?
Evan and Amanda?
Sid?
Gordon?
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