Oh, don't be so melodramatic... It doesn't suit you.
I enjoyed reading this. Interesting premise, a couple of unique characters, and has a lot of potential for some very cool action scenes in the future pages. The review/critique is attached. Feel free to PM with with questions or when you put more of it up. Nice job!
Pattycakes wrote:Oh, don't be so melodramatic... It doesn't suit you. :P -Pattycakes
Ha. It's not so much melodramatic as it is just pure and unchecked frustration. I might be a little impatient, but the truth is that I've had many works in the Advanced Critiques section and even the ones that I consider dear to my heart go largely ignored. So maybe I shouldn't get so pissed off, but it happens on occasion.
Thanks for reading mate. I'll see to it that you get some points for it.
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