Ok so I am new here and I literally just joined like a half hour ago. I took some time to look around browse over some writing and some forums. Then I took some time to think of an idea to start off with here. Well here is a summary of my idea, please give me tips and reviews of what you think.
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Lana lives in the normal human world, acting like every other 16 year old. But she has a secret. She of course isn't normal. Lana has a mark on her wrist that has a symbol, she doesn't really know what it is but she knows it could get her into trouble, she just has that feeling. Lana is what humans that hunt her call the Chosen. Being chosen means she has abilities that are considered dangerous and unknown to humans. The humans have gone into a peculiar way of living. If it's different and unknown it is dangerous. At least that's what the government has led the citizens into believing. But really the government just doesn't want these so called Chosen people to uncover what they can do. Each Chosen has the common abilities and one unique ability. The common abilities are noticing lies, being faster than most, and most of all keen hearing. But Lana is a special case, she is the first and only hybrid. She doesn't notice lies and she is just slightly faster than others, barely noticeable. She doesn't have keen hearing either. She has the mark but only some people have seen it and just assume its a weird birthmark since she doesn't really show any other abilities. But she does have a unique ability and when its a few days after she turns 16 she her ability shows. Another chosen sees it and he is strict with her and tells her to learn how to hide it if she wants to stay alive. But the hunters start to watch her closer..... will she stay alive?
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What do you guys think?
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