Young Writers Society

Hello!
So I need your opinion. Which idea do you think is better?

- Lena Conners is a sixteen-tear old high school student who always received the perfect grades, the perfect life, and is always a good girl. One day, new student, Colin Reed, turns her life around only to find out that he was raised by wolves.

- Kassandra Will loves horror and gore, which makes everyone in her class afraid of her. One day, she slips into a coma, only to live in a horror of her own.

Not my best ideas but yeah c:

Personally, the first one seems a bit overused and cliche. However, the second one seems different and creative. I would run with it, my friend!

The second one! It could go down a very interesting path .

I agree with the person above me.

I vote number 2! (Basically for the same reasons as John)

Both of them sound intriguing, for sure. But I have to go with the majority here and say #2. I'd totally read that. Sounds awesome!

I like number 2 as well!

Both!

Splice them together. Tie Kassandras coma and nightmarish dreams to Colins mysterious past. Maybe her actions could have some kind of direct impact on Lena.

Yes, I would suggest both as well. "Perfect" is relative, therefore loving horror and scaring people around her could mean the perfect life. I'd also determine perfect grades— some places actually consider "perfect grades" to be in the 80s, with enough extracurriculars to make you interesting a better bet. Harvard back in the day actually didn't want top grades; they wanted people with an active extracurricular life and 80s. 90s was deemed "too introverted" because you were spending too much time studying.

It would also provide a nice twist on both stories— the social outcast is happy with her life and ends up living a nightmare in her coma.

I agree that both could go very well meshed together. If you feel that you could write one that would keep you interested in it as a writer, go for that one, but if you can mix them it would be fabulous.

I would say both are good options.
But in my opinion I would love to read the one where the girl lives in her own horror!

I think with that one you can write more and get more ideas since she's in a dream and you can make the whole story change since it's outside of reality!

True werewolves may not be in reality but humans and school are.
I just think the other other one has more potential.

But it's your choice but I hope uou pick the dream one.
Bye!

I really love the second one! If you don't take it, I might.. >:)