I've been drifting in and out of this forum for years and yesterday I found an old story I wrote 'firebird' and when I read it was fascinated by how I used to write. My language has changed considerably.
But I thought it was beautiful, a bit creepy-stalker-esque-male character but nothing I haven't tried to rework except it wasn't finished, not really, and I don't want to ruin it, but don't want to leave it alone
I envy how I wrote it, bad in places, but great in others. I just love how it sounded and has potential in my opinion just so conflicted because I've tried to continue it down four different paths the last few days and they all SUCKED because I was transferring 2013-me to my 2008-me writing styles that ended up clashing horribly. It's annoying me.
Should I keep at it? Or leave it/try to wrap it up into a very short story? I am so glad old theads don't get deleted on here, I keep finding old stories I posted, it's a goldmine
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