Sorry to be a bother, but just want some feedback on my idea for a story based on a comic I read.
A couple of friends are over at their friend's house. He invited them over because he found this weird board game called "Transformation" in his basement. So anyways, they set up the game and begin. One guy rolls the dice and he lands a space that says "Card. He picks the card and it says "Baby". He suddenly begins to transform into a one month old baby, force to re-live his life from that age.
Well?
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