Okay, so I've been thinking about a story idea for a long time. I want an opinion on it please. I have write the first two pages, but think they suck. The first chapter will be posted soon. Anyway, my idea!
Eleanor Grenefeld, a thief, and her best friend Samuel, a pickpocket, are under threat. They live in an abandoned tavern in the city of Arin, where they are constantly living in fear of the Lawkeepers. The Lawkeepers are just one of the many guilds in the Realm, who provide everything it needs. But even they are on the edge. Children are disappearing and the Lawkeepers are being attacked. The unknown Guild of Thieves have been stealing children and forcing them to become soldiers to attack their greatest enemy, who are the Lawkeepers.
When Samuel is caught and hung for his crimes, Eleanor knows it is time to flee. But when the Guild of Thieves try to recruit her, she readily agrees, understanding what their life is like. But time is running out, an her actions could change the Realm forever.
This will be a series if books.
Thanks
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