Hello,
So... I have an idea that I've tested around a bit. I had some of it posted on another website, but since no one goes online there anymore, I have no one to give me feedback. I wanted to know if anyone has any ideas on this. I haven't written anything on it in quite some time, so I'm going back through, reading it, and rewriting some of it.
Any comments on this little prologue type thing?
Thanks!
Prologue:
She was, by far, the most desirable person I had ever met. Everyone meets people and thinks they are the most beautiful, but they are replaced by another soon after. Not this girl; she was the one to end the chain. There was only one problem: She definitely wanted me dead. Isn’t that what everyone always says? Sure, people joke about the issue, but once in a lifetime, you’ll meet the one person who isn’t joking. She was mine.
This girl, so far removed from anything I’d ever seen in life; she was a killer. No one would ever know, so how did I? I had seen her in the act. Now there was only one thing left for her to do: take me out. I was a liability, a risk, because I knew who she was, I knew what she did. I was faced with a dilemma: find the most desirable woman to ever walk the Earth or save my life by staying away from her.
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