I mean, I'm not awesome, but I can edit if you'd like! I reviewed something of your's yesterday, was the stuff I pointed out the kind of thing you're looking for?
Don't we all? My mom has offered to do mine. She is an English geek, and I am decidedly opposite of that. My grammar is terrible. I followed a diy book binding guide and put my story in book format, which really helps it circulate and get edited.
"It suddenly struck me that that tiny pea, pretty and blue, was the Earth. I put up my thumb and shut one eye, and my thumb blotted out the planet Earth. I didn't feel like a giant. I felt very, very small." — Neil Armstrong
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