Okay, so my character is in a coma and important things go on as she is in the coma. My friend recommended me to have the mc(Kyra) be in a "spirit form", like having an out of body experience and watching what is going on. She is in a coma but is still seeing and hearing everything in "spirit" form.
Questions to help pondering...
1.Any ideas on how to start off the chapter?
2.Like, how to say that she is lingering around her body watching the scene and discussion before her?
3.Do I say she is in a spirit form?
4. Does she know what is happening?
5. When she wakes up, does she think it was a dream?
**The story is a fantasy/science fiction, so her being in a spirit form would be pretty normal.
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