Hey I want to become a better writer but I also like the idea of changing rhyme schemes in poetry. It's not always in a pattern or anything but when I read it to myself it sounds good. My readers often say they are confused with my rhythm for my poetry but I continue to do it anyway because that's how i like to write; in a sort of dialog kind of way. For example;
"I am one without a faith
But what I believe will never last
And when evidence is not enough
Theories are all I have
So if I told you how we're made
Not a single thing would change
That like anything it fades
And in the end I live in shame.
I am one without an answer
Trueness or reality is mystery to me
A place that we can never see!
A truth that you and I can never be
Never to be proven with no return
And the very second my belief will burn
I will watch its particles turning
Yearning to be a fact."
Does anyone know of a author who writes in a similar way of changing rhyme schemes and his ability to keep rythem on a large scale for the average reader? Do you have any tips on how I can make my poetry more rhythmic without basic punctuation or do you think I should just write with the same rhyme schemes? I really need help here.
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