Young Writers Society

Hey! My friends and I are writing a book and we all came up with original names for it. I already posted a poll but wanted to post it heard to get more input on this, it's really important to me! You can vote twice so that if you like two the same you can vote for both or if you like one more you can vote for it twice

WE all tried to come up with interesting original names. Names that you could believe kids made up for themselves. Ren is 14. She's the unofficial leader of the group. She's pretty tough mentally, but about average physically. She likes to be ahead of the game and know things. I names her Ren because it's the phonetic spelling of wren and she can fly. Rhode is 11. She's athletic, smart, calm, and cool. She can breathe infinitely underswater and it imporoved athletically because she can absorbe oxygen through her pores. She's named Rhode after some greek deity. Sunshine's 8. She's a sweet little girl from the south with red hair who can talk and control animals. She's named sunshine after her hair.

Well, tell me what you think!

I'd also like to know what you think about the characters. What could I do to make them special? And if you want to know anything more, just ask.

Sounds like a story for younger kids. Although to be honest...those names....um...

Sunshine make me think of Sunshine California, and its too generic and sounds like it was someone pet hamsters name...

Ren...although I have never seen it before...makes me think of a hen...which is just not working in my head lol...unless she is a chicken....

Rhode well lets face it the first thing tha pops into my head is Rhode Island...

So my honest opinion - These names need improving on if you are going for original If you are not going for original names then they are wonderful.

KJR

P.S. Hope this helps and was not offensive...