Righto i shall begin by reminding any poor souls who diverted their attention to 'Sunburnt Thirst' my NaNo horror. I did finish it at 90 something thousand words but it's now under major rewrite because it was indeed tooo twilightish.
First of all: I've reversed like... nearly everything from twilight. Vamp man has been obsessed for decades about reuniting with humans because he longs for human companionship so he pretty much has devoted his life to being 'human'. Only to find when he goes to school everybody doesn't like him because he's gorgeous and thrillingly beautiful. Oh and vampie doesn't have a power He's the only one.
He has red eyes that turn black i imagine him being all scary like when they're red. mwahaha
And he has to more or less fight to control his raging feelings toward this poor human who does fall in love with him but is more or less frightened of him, to an extent, and he's confronted by how she continually changes her feelings toward him.
And they drain humans of their blood then pump it back in to change them to vampires! Ah i had so much fun coming up with that. Rarely humans survive so when human girlie decides (in a later story) she wants in on the vamp powers he refuses.
That's only the first 'installment'. Because i'd written so much and i love most of what i wrote for the original version, i'm simply cutting it into 6 different stories, so each have beginning/middle/end and are a different part of their life.
My main point of posting this, if you've read above, is still too twilight? He of course wins her heart (duh) and he wants to kill her but he more or less struggles to balance his thirst for her blood and the passion for her. yeah.
If anybody would like to read a few pages feel free to pm me but i'm not really expecting anybody to be bothered.
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