Young Writers Society

Ok well I am writing a book that is about one girl torn between staying with her best friend that she has fallen in love with or entering the world of vampires and the night with a man three hundres and thirty years older than she. It is Nathan, Christine, and Rei. Ill try to add more description later because though it may sound like eclipse now, it isnt any thing like that. I need a title badly. I just cant think of one that I like.

Okay so you need to write the outline of the story and get to the ending. And then when you do study the plot as much as possible. take a notebook and write all the sudden words or comments that come into your mind. I usually easily come up with a title afterward.

Or you could just read the ending and name the title after a part of the ending or a place in the ending etc.

Hope this helps.

From what you told us here i could give you just a "poor" title - Sun's touch

Umm....Well, I am bad at title's too.
ONly you know which title will be the best since you know things in the story that we don't.
Anyways, how about this one...the decision of life..
I know it sucks...

umm maybe 'Night and love' or 'love and night' I'm not that good at it.

Here are some suggestions:

Captive Hearts
Silent at Dusk
Dawn Will Break The Silence

and the favorite choice being:

The Breaking Point

Hope these help

Personally, from experience, when I'm naming a novel/story/piece/whatever it is you write/ I just think of the most random word or phrase that relates with the subject at hand...it always seems to work.

Just sit still and relax and in a while a good title should pop into your head, lol. It always works for me. maybe,

Turning point

I dunno. Hope this helped.

Make sure it's eye catching. You want it to stand out on the shelves, no?

I mean, I've named one of my stories 'The Zipper of Your Pants'...random can be good :p