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Sat Sep 13, 2008 4:28 pm
gigirl942 says...



I'm currently doing a rewrite of a book I hope to publish one day. I really haven't gotten that far...only a few pages in actually, but I really like the plot... :oops:



It's called The Screamer and it's about a girl who finds out she is destined to bring about the apocalypse, but only if certain conditions are met.




I really don't want to post the whole plot here, but when I am done with the draft of the first chapter I will try and find someone to privately critique it for me!
  





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Sat Sep 13, 2008 4:33 pm
Fellow says...



I got a book too. I actually finished it and i`m rewriting it. If you need any help i`ll be more than happy to help you up. I can help you al lot with descriptions, character development, actions, dialogues...

Anyway hope you`ll get it published.
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Sat Sep 13, 2008 4:36 pm
gigirl942 says...



Fellow wrote:I got a book too. I actually finished it and i`m rewriting it. If you need any help i`ll be more than happy to help you up. I can help you al lot with descriptions, character development, actions, dialogues...

Anyway hope you`ll get it published.




Thanks so much for offering to help me! I'll PM you the plot and congrats on getting your book done!
  





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Sat Sep 13, 2008 4:38 pm
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Don't worry! I`ll always help me fellow writers ...
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Sat Sep 13, 2008 4:45 pm
gigirl942 says...



Haha, thanks again!
  





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Sat Sep 13, 2008 5:55 pm
Cobra says...



I could do critique. I'm writing a book as well and I've got about a hundred pages done.
The corpses are piled high around. Blood carpets the floor and flames scorch away the last remnants of humanity. The screams of the damned echo in my head. I smile. I am home.
  





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Sat Sep 13, 2008 11:35 pm
gigirl942 says...



Thank you for replying! I'll keep you in mind!
  





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Sun Sep 14, 2008 12:26 am
thunder_dude7 says...



You need critiques? That's what we're here for. You can send me the plot or any other info you'd like critiqued. I'm still not a hugely experienced writer, really. As in, style isn't my expertice. But I can help you with setting up stuff.
  





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Sun Sep 14, 2008 4:10 am
Carlito says...



That plot sounds really interesting!
Good luck with it...I'd be happy to read over anything you've done :D
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Sun Sep 14, 2008 2:08 pm
gigirl942 says...



Thank you all for being so nice! I'm currently working with Fellow to make my plot even better, and as soon as we get a good plan I will continue writing!
  








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