hi, i've been working on my book, Heart Stabbed Blade for about a month now. i have more than a chapter typed, and more than 4 written. but i need some help. my book is both an action and a romance, but mostly romance. do you think i should try to step up the adventure/battle situations, or keep the romance as the main part of the story? i am just aking about your tastes, by the way
here is my overview (and, yes i do know that i need to work on names in the future):
Takato is a first year I high school. Three years ago, his parents vanished, leaving him only their huge house and a bank account. The only person he has told of this is Rena, a girl Takato met shortly after their disappearance.
One day, a strange phenomenon occurs at Rena and Takato’s school, and Takato does everything in his power to protect Rena, both of them get caught in a war that has been hidden from humans for centuries.
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