Hello there,
I'm pretty new to this site but I've been working on my novel for some time now and I'm at a point where I'd love feedback. Nitpicks and mechanics are ok, but plot, character, and general impressions are much better considering this is still a rough draft and making finalized mechanical adjustments would likely be changed later anyway. I have about 65,000 words, 275 pages and I'm about ten chapters away from finishing which would be a huge accomplishment for me. If you have the time please give it a read and feel free to request a review back. The novel is in my port under Devil's Book (I'd post a link but I can't figure them out ).
Short plot summery . . .
Alex is a seventeen year old boy who is pulled into the shark filled waters of the vampire world against his will. At every turn he tries to escape the evil that he now seems unable to control. He finds a curious old book and an ambitious and manipulative spirit seeps into his blood and begins to take over his mind and body. Meanwhile all of the vampires he comes across seem to be pulling him in different directions, all of them leading into further darkness. His vision of good and evil begin to change, and despite his surroundings he comes to understand friendship as he never did when he was alive. In a world of power and seduction, he battles for control of his immortal soul.
That's pretty rough but it will give you an idea. The story is in third person and bounces back between a few points of view, usually touching for a chapter or two on each character but almost always focused on Alex. I hope you are interested. At the risk of offending potential readers, this is not a stephanie myers copycat and hopefully will have few similarities while still appealing to similar age groups and genre fans.
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