Obviously, a character profile can't contain everything that's important, but it can contain a lot.
So, fire away!
By the way, I know this is relatively rough, and I'm just a wee bit embarrassed by how it reads. : P
Also, there are some of my personal fantasy terms in there, so, if you want explanations, ask me for... well... explanations.
Name: Donik Carak
Character Type: Lead
Story Goal: To lead what’s left of his surrogate family, and other Wielder families, to safety.
Gender: Male
Age: 19
Distinctive Visual Traits: Big nose, olive skin, long hair tied in the back with a string of leather or blue ribbon, depending on the social context.
Height: 6 feet 9 inches
Body type: Long and lanky
Hair color: Golden Brown
Eye color: Dark Green
Mannerisms: Gesticulates when trying to make a point, smirks a lot, movements are precise but resemble a hurried giraffe, uses his eyebrows to convey displeasure or surprise, slides into a glance when doubtful or sneaky
Distinctive Speech Pattern: Casual with an intellectual twist and, occasionally, a strong spike of cynicism. In terms of tone, it’s quite nasal, like he’s speaking out of his forehead.
Personality: Courageous, virtuous, has a self depreciating sense of humor, intelligent, a budding sense of calculation, aggressive
Background: Donik was born in the ghetto of a fishing and trade town within the City State of Vagonu and was abandoned by his parents for reasons unknown. He lived his early childhood as an orphan on the streets, but was taken in and “raised” by an older boy named Erkek, who protected Donik and taught him the basics of street fighting. A few years later, after Erkek had been killed in a fight and Donik was on his own, he was about to be killed himself when Marcus Carak intervened and saved him. Afterwards, Marcus and his wife Angela adopted Donik. He was then raised and educated along with the rest of the Carak children. After observing that Donik had natural talent in fighting, in addition to a long reach, Marcus personally tutored him in the use of staffs. Through this, he became both a budding scholar and a skilled, classically trained, fighter. Throughout his late prepubescense and teens, he traveled with Marcus and the rest of the family on diplomatic trips as his apprentice and page.
Personal life: When in London, he lives with the rest of the Carak family in a large, well furnished, townhouse within Kensington. When on the road, they live in a lavish black stagecoach. His best friend is Harold Churchill, twenty-one, the son of a Wielder Delegate and his love interest is Harold’s younger sister, Anna Churchill, eighteen. In terms of recreation, he talks with Harold and Anna and other sons and daughters of Delegates, or plays Go.
Private Life: When he’s alone, Donik reads or trains excessively, often into the wee-hours.
Work life: He is Marcus Carak’s apprentice and page. Duties include escort to all political events Marcus attends, transcription, retrieval of manuscripts and Motions, etc…
Strength: Mental resolve
Weakness: Over confident, prone to fits of anger
Gender:
Points: 890
Reviews: 6