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Thu Jun 19, 2008 11:45 pm
Moony says...



Many uncountable moons have past since the great journey, and the clans nolonger live by the lake. Their once great lake home dried up seasons after their arrival, for the time of dry weather forced the four clans to leave once again. StarClan brought them to a very large forest, where plenty of moore, trees, and marshes along with a river lay. StarClan also gave them new clan names, ThunderClan is now TreeClan, ShadowClan is HiddenClan, RiverClan is StreamClan, and WindClan is now RushingClan. The new clans have settled into their new homes, and old rivalries are comeing back from the shadows, will the clans survive?



TREECLAN~

LEADER~ Treestar- beautiful, tortiosshell she-cat with olive green eyes(warrior name= Treepool)

DEPUTY~ Forestheart- older dark brown tom with olive green eyes, also brother to Treestar's mother

MEDICINE CAT~ Fallencloud- pretty jet-black she-cat with electric blue eyes and a fluffy pelt

WARRIORS~ Leaffall- tortiosshell she-cat with amber eyes

Mousepelt- ginger tom with darker flecks, green eyes= Apprentice~ Lunarpaw

Twilightmoon- handsome darker grey tom with bright blue eyes= Apprentice~ Mallowpaw

Foxtail- muscular reddish brown tabby tom with green eyes

Kestralwing- beutiful white she-cat with ginger ears and blue eyes= Apprentice~ Riverpaw

Bluebird- long-limbed blue-grey she-cat with green blue eyes

Pantherpelt- jet-black tom with shiny silver whiskers and green eyes= Apprentice~ Sparrowpaw

Mintwhisker- (the youngest warrior) creamy white fluffy she-cat with big pale green eyes

Eagletalon- muscular golden brown tom with amber eyes= Apprentice~ Wingedpaw

Spottedtail- bigger ginger tom with a tail covered in darker ginger spots, gree-amber eyes

Deadtail- (oldest warrior) orange tabby with a drooping dead tail(hence the name), pale blue eyes= Apprentice~ Petalpaw

APPRENTICES~ Lunarpaw- silver grey she-cat with black spots all over her back, amber-moon eyes

Mallowpaw- orange tabby she-cat, pale blue eyes

Riverpaw- handsome dark grey tom, amber eyes

Sparrowpaw- light fluffy brown tom, amber eyes

Wingedpaw- dusty grey tom, green eyes

Petalpaw- grey and white she-cat with blue eyes

QUEENS~ Flowerclaw- beautiful, fluffy grey she-cat with a creamy underbelly, green eyes, mother of Twilightmoon's kits

Goldenfire- smaller golden she-cat with fire amber eyes, mother of Eagletalon's kits

Hollyfern- a heavily pregnant she-cat with long-limbs, she has a jet-black pelt and blue eyes

KITS~ Shrewkit-(Flowerclaw) black tom-kit with a white underbelly, green eyes

Toadkit- (Flowerclaw) brown tom-kit, bright blue eyes

Amberkit- (Flowerclaw) dark grey she-kit with amber eyes

Dawnkit- (Goldenfire) golden she-kit with eyes the color of a dawn sky(descandant of Firestar and Tigerstar)

Duskkit- (Goldenfire) darker grey tom-kit with darke blue eyes (descandant of Firestar and Tigerstar)

ELDERS~ Firetail- fluffy orange tom with a flame tail, amber eyes

Moorefoot- (oldest cat in the clan) light grey tom with a battle scarred muzzle, green eyes

Ripped-ear- (oldest nursery queen) once pretty brown she-cat with olive green eyes, her left ear is completley shredded, (warrior name= Barkflower), also mother of Treestar



HIDDENCLAN

LEADER~ Hiddenstar- handsome, jet-black tom with darke blue eyes (warrior name= Hiddenheart)

DEPUTY~ Jagstone- grey tom with a long tail, amber eyes

MEDICINE CAT~ Lizardfire- small brown she-cat with fire amber eyes= Apprentice~ Hollowpaw

WARRIORS~ Gorseclaw- creamy white tom with dark brown paws, amber eyes= Apprentice~ Sorrowpaw

Moltenpelt- (oldest warrior) molten brown tom with amber eyes= Apprentice~ Gorgepaw

Shadowriver- dark grey she-cat with green eyes, (descandant of Shadowstar)= Apprentice~ Owlpaw

Nightflame- (youngest warrior)black tom with amber eyes

Sunpool- light brown tabby tom with bright amber eyes= Apprentice~ Wolfpaw

Ashheart- white and dark grey she-cat with green eyes= Apprentice~ Shimmerpaw

Cloudedfoot- dark tabby tom with one white foot and blue eyes (descandant of Tawnypelt)= Apprentice~ Thistlepaw

Juniperflower- beautiful dark ginger she-cat with green eyes

Saffronfur- yellowish-ginger she-cat with orange splotches on her back, soft green eyes

Whitesplash- light grey wom with white splashed on his face, blue eyes= Apprentice~ Rosepaw

Marbletail- big, muscular tortiosshell tom with amber eyes

APPRENTICES~ Hollowpaw- grey tom with darker grey paws and amber eyes

Gorgepaw- light grey tom with green eyes

Sorrowpaw- golden tabby tom with blue eyes

Owlpaw- fluffy grey tom with amber eyes

Wolfpaw- larger dusty dark grey tom with blue eyes

Shimmerpaw- bright ginger she-cat with blue eyes

Thistlepaw- dark tabby tom with olive green eyes

Rosepaw- light ginger she-cat with blue eyes

QUEENS~ Zephyrheart- solid light brown she-cat with green eyes, mother of Jagstone's kits

Poppyfoot- long-limbed grey she-cat with amber eyes, mother of Hiddenstar's kits

KITS~ Honeykit- (Zephyrheart)honey colored she-kit with pale green eyes

Brightkit- (Zephyrheart)bright ginger she-kit with a long tail and amber eyes

Greykit- (Zephyrheart)grey tom-kit with green eyes

Dustkit- (Zephyrheart)dusty grey tom-kit with amber eyes

Shadowkit- (Poppyfoot)dark grey tom with amber eyes

Crowkit- (Poppyfoot)dark grey tom with amber eyes

Ravenkit- (Poppyfoot)black tom with blue eyes

Howlingkit- (Poppyfoot)grey tom with green eyes

Lavenderkit- (Poppyfoot)light grey she-cat with pale green eyes

ELDERS~ Yewtongue- a brown tom with a sharp tongue and complaines about everything, amber eyes (warrior name= Barkleaf)

Whisperear- (oldest cat in clan)grey she-cat with green eyes



STREAMCLAN

LEADER~ Streamstar- slender, long-limbed, sleak, grey she-cat with soft blue eyes (warrior name= Streamfur)

DEPUTY~ Shallowberry- beautiful light ginger she-cat with silver blue eyes

MEDICINE CAT~ Sootclaw- dark grey almost black tom with a fluffy white tail and green eyes= Apprentice~ Birdpaw

WARRIORS~ Frailpelt- very small grey tabby she-cat with amber eyes

Shadefur- dark grey she-cat with green eyes= Apprentice~ Lilypaw

Lionfang- golden brown tom with olive green eyes= Apprentice~ Yewpaw

Foxheart- brown tom with amber eyes= Apprentice~ Mudpaw

Mistypool- misty grey she-cat with grey blue eyes= Apprentice~ Nimblepaw

Bumbleberry- golden brown tabby she-cat with blue eyes

Jaggedsnout- (oldest warrior) white tom with dark grey stripes and a scarred muzzle, amber eyes

Silverwhisker- tortiosshell she-cat with silver whiskers and green eyes= Apprentice~ Runningpaw

Crestedmoon- creamy white she-cat with blueish amber eyes

Firerunner- flame coloured tom with blue eyes= Apprentice~ Wetpaw

Barleyclaw- black and white tom with green eyes

Lavendertooth- light grey tabby she-cat with blue eyes

Saltedpelt- dark grey she-cat with a white dusted pelt and olive green eyes= Apprentice~ Thornpaw

APPRENTICES~ Birdpaw- light brown tom with blue eyes

Lilypaw- light brown she-cat with blue eyes

Yewpaw- fluffy light ginger she-cat with blue eyes

Mudpaw- muddy brown tom with green eyes

Nimblepaw- slender grey she-cat with longer-limbs and green eyes

Runningpaw- grey tom with longer-limbs and green eyes

Wetpaw-sleak grey she-cat with green eyes

QUEENS~ Morningclaw- beautiful golden she-cat with green eyes, mother of Barleyclaw's kits

Snowywing- pretty snow white she-cat with blue eyes, she is also blind, mother of Firerunner's kits

Redstreak- light ginger she-cat with a red streak down her back, mother Lionfang's kits

Demi- beautiful darker grey she-cat with green eyes (came to StreamClan to have her kits), mother Dash's kits

KITS~ Pebblekit- (Morningclaw)pretty grey and white speckled she-kit with amber eyes

Vinxkit- (Morningclaw)black tom-kit with amber eyes

Cloudkit- (Snowywing) fluffy white she-kit with amber eyes

Flamingkit- (Snowywing) orange tom-kit with blue eyes, blind

Bearkit- (Redstreak) brown tom-kit with amber eyes

Goldenkit- (Redstreak) golden she-kit with blue eyes

Whisperkit- (Demi) darker grey she-kit with green eyes

Windkit- (Demi) lighter grey tom-kit with amber eyes


ELDERS~ Forgottenheart- very small white and grey tabby tom with green eyes, was named for his short memory, (warrior name= Dustedpelt)

No~tail- very old golden tabby tom with green eyes, he has no tail, (warrior name= Lionstripe)

Moonwhisker- once beautiful grey tabby she-cat with silvery whiskers, blue eyes



RUSHINGCLAN

LEADER~ Rushingstar- handsome white tom with a long jet-black tail and green eyes, (warrior name- Rushingtail)

DEPUTY~ Lilyflower- pretty brown she-cat with silver blue eyes

MEDICINE CAT~ Honeypool- grey tom with honey yellow eyes= Apprentice~ Berrypaw

WARRIORS~ Marshfoot- white tom with muddy brown paws and green eyes= Apprentice~ Fernpaw

Leopardwhisker- spotted golden tabby she-cat with amber eyes

Brambletooth- dark brown tom with amber eyes

Windfall- light grey tom with blue eyes= Apprentice~ Mosspaw

Russetstream- (youngest warrior)redish tabby tom with blue eyes

Ravenear- grey tom with jet-black ears and amber eyes= Apprentice~ Stormpaw

Watermint- (oldest warrior)dark grey tabby tom with amber eyes

Dazzleleaf- tortiosshell she-cat with leaf green eyes= Apprentice~ Tawnypaw

Sharpclaw- ginger tom with blue eyes

APPRENTICES~ Berrypaw- brown tom with green eyes

Fernpaw- grey tabby she-cat with blue eyes

Mosspaw- tortiosshell she-cat with amber eyes

Stormpaw- white, grey, and black tom with amber eyes

Tawnypaw- tortiosshell she-cat with blue eyes

QUEENS~ Hollyflower- pretty grey she-cat with amber eyes, mother of Ravenear's kits

Swiftmoon- pregnant grey tabby she-cat with blue eyes, mother of Marshfoot's kits

KITS~ Thunderkit- grey tom-kit with amber eyes

Dashkit- (Hollyflower)very small white she-kit with blue eyes, blind

ELDERS~ Sablefeather- grey she-cat with blue eyes


CATS OUTSIDE CLANS

Scasha- (kittpet)pretty fluffy black she-cat with amber eyes

Fallen- (loner)black she-cat with electric blue eyes

Mable- (rogue)tortiosshell tom with green eyes

Spots- (loner)black and white tom with amber eyes

Briar- (loner)brown tom with blue eyes

Dash- (rogue)black tom with green eyes, father of Demi's kits
  





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Sat Jun 21, 2008 10:32 pm
KaatiieBugg says...



OH! You like Warriors?
Yay! I absolutely love the series and erin hunter, she's just great!!
This sounds interesting, I like the new Clan names and I can't wait to read the actual story!
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Wed Jun 25, 2008 2:52 am
Firearris says...



I also can't wait! :D I love the series.

Kaatiie -- Erin Hunter comes up with the ideas for the series, but two other people actually write it.
[Griffinkeeper] 10:45 pm: The guard appears "We have weasels now!"
[Firearris] 10:45 pm: askes the guard for the weasel!
[Griffinkeeper] 10:45 pm: The guard gives Firearris the Weasel.
[Firearris] 10:46 pm: aquires the weasel and renames it "Cat"

Take that, Lumi.
  





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Wed Jun 25, 2008 6:38 am
Moony says...



thank you for commenting on this :D

Kaatiie- I cant wait for you to read the story either and I am glad you like the new clan names!

Firearris- And to correct you to, Erin Hunter is just a name three different women came up with to not confuse readers, and none of their names are Erin Hunter, there is Cherith Baldry, Kate Cary and Victoria Holmes
  





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Wed Jun 25, 2008 8:41 am
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moon14 wrote:Firearris- And to correct you to, Erin Hunter is just a name three different women came up with to not confuse readers, and none of their names are Erin Hunter, there is Cherith Baldry, Kate Cary and Victoria Holmes
Oh, haha :D Can't wait for this! Hurry up and write. ;)
[Griffinkeeper] 10:45 pm: The guard appears "We have weasels now!"
[Firearris] 10:45 pm: askes the guard for the weasel!
[Griffinkeeper] 10:45 pm: The guard gives Firearris the Weasel.
[Firearris] 10:46 pm: aquires the weasel and renames it "Cat"

Take that, Lumi.
  





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Wed Jun 25, 2008 7:25 pm
Sare Agama says...



Very interesting. I too love the series, and this sounds promising. Can't wait to read the story! :D I just might write my own Warriors fanfic, since some people other than me love the series. :wink: :D
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Wed Jun 25, 2008 7:56 pm
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ClimberSquirrel wrote:Very interesting. I too love the series, and this sounds promising. Can't wait to read the story! :D I just might write my own Warriors fanfic, since some people other than me love the series. :wink: :D
Haha, there are a lot more than the ones who posted here. :P
[Griffinkeeper] 10:45 pm: The guard appears "We have weasels now!"
[Firearris] 10:45 pm: askes the guard for the weasel!
[Griffinkeeper] 10:45 pm: The guard gives Firearris the Weasel.
[Firearris] 10:46 pm: aquires the weasel and renames it "Cat"

Take that, Lumi.
  





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Fri Jun 27, 2008 2:14 am
Ross says...



I love the Warrior series! Please continue with this! PLEASE!!!
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Fri Jun 27, 2008 2:21 am
Teague says...



Um... this really doesn't belong in Fanfiction. There's no story.

*moves to Writer's Corner*

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Fri Jun 27, 2008 2:31 am
Firearris says...



Saint Razorblade wrote:Um... this really doesn't belong in Fanfiction. There's no story.

*moves to Writer's Corner*

-:pirate3:
It...doesn't? This is a fanfic, just the names of the clans for it.... :?
[Griffinkeeper] 10:45 pm: The guard appears "We have weasels now!"
[Firearris] 10:45 pm: askes the guard for the weasel!
[Griffinkeeper] 10:45 pm: The guard gives Firearris the Weasel.
[Firearris] 10:46 pm: aquires the weasel and renames it "Cat"

Take that, Lumi.
  





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Fri Jun 27, 2008 3:01 am
Moony says...



um... I am making the stories Razor
  





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Fri Jun 27, 2008 9:11 pm
thunder_dude7 says...



Erin Hunter is just a name three different women came up with to not confuse readers, and none of their names are Erin Hunter, there is Cherith Baldry, Kate Cary and Victoria Holmes.


Didn't know that.

I love the books, I might read this.
  





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Wed Jul 09, 2008 12:20 am
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I love the idea that you thought of. But, isn't that kind of like, stealing a story idea? Are the warrior books copyright or not? I am not sure if you need permission from Erin Hunter or not... But still, I like your idea about how they have to move again. It is also nice how you put new cats. It is nice to start fresh, Pick new favorites. :D
  





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Thu Jul 17, 2008 5:40 pm
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Firearris wrote:It...doesn't? This is a fanfic, just the names of the clans for it.... :?


Yeah, but it's more like an outline than something people can comment on and critique. ^^

I haven't read the "Warriors" series, but this sounds interesting. The fact that there's so much fanfiction based around it makes me want to pick up the books and see what it's about...
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Sun Jul 20, 2008 7:13 am
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Whoa, that's a LOT of cats. It'll be interesting to see how you can fit them all into a story. A story with main characters as cats would be a difficult concept, and it sounds like there's potential for humour as well.
  








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