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Thu Jun 05, 2008 11:17 pm
gryffgotgame says...



Hi, I'm working on my novel--Lone Teen--and have gotten some decent reviews. However, I really want to know if the idea and storyline I've created so far are worth it because I would like to try my hand at getting Lone Teen published. The readers are most important though and I want to know if you guys actually like the story. I wrote it when I was bored and ended up loving the MC, but that's probably because I wrote the story lol. Please read, review, or respond if you get the chance. Thanks!!! =)
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Fri Jun 13, 2008 1:14 pm
khfan890 says...



I'll go read it and tell you what I think. :wink:
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Fri Jun 13, 2008 2:33 pm
Emerson says...



If you want reviews, why not look here?
β€œIt's necessary to have wished for death in order to know how good it is to live.”
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Fri Jun 13, 2008 6:50 pm
khfan890 says...



Just wondering, I've read the first two chapters, and are all your chapters that short?
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Sat Jun 21, 2008 12:29 am
gryffgotgame says...



Yeah, they're pretty much that short. These are very rough drafts of the chapters though. I know a lot of work needs to be done on them lol=) Thanks for the help! :D
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