However, in one of the opening paragraphs, I have this:
Eight reasons. Eight reasons why I kissed Hayden Beaufort, eight reasons why I bailed on you, eight reasons why I sent that text, and eight reasons why I came home wearing Naomi's clothes.
My question is, would it be cheating /breaking the rules of continuity if I were to introduce these other events my charater mentions in that paragraph prior to all the 'eight reasons' being fulfilled? Or would I be better off restructuring the opeing paragraph so that the events (aside from the kissing one) aren't lumped in as part of the eight reasons? I ask because I feel that they woud be better if they were interspersed through the story, rather than chucked in at the end
all at once, but at the same time, I don't wany readers to be all "BUT SHE SAID EIGHT REASONS AND WE ARE ONLY UP TO FIVE!"
So yeah. Thoughts?
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