A problem I get sometimes when I write, and other people too as I have noticed is using the word ''as''.
I tend to use it all the time without noticing it, and probably use it around three times in a paragraph without dialogue.
Examples;
He reached for the surface, as he gasped for air.
As he rode down the path, he noticed a shadowy figure moving behind the trees.
These are examples of when I usually use it.
Therefore, I am wondering about synonyms and other nice ways to build a sentence without making it sound too weird.
I am using ''whilst'', ''while'' and ''when'' to have some variety, but it can get pretty boring with the same words all the time.
Thanks for reading this.
- Zontafer
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