I went to the critique circle the other day and checked it out. It's a site all about critiquing. So I decided to submit chapters one through three of "Why" and see what kind of critiques I would get. I got one that wasn't really helpful at all. Then I got one that looked pretty good, but half way through it the guy referred to me as a "damn kid" because I had repeated that a character was unconscious three times.
AAH!
I threw some obscene language at him and that was that.
So anyway, I'm glad I have YWS.
And I'm sorry I ever tried to find another writing site. *badness*
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