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I have chosen the emotion of fear. Swamps and forests and mountains can often look so pretty that we forget how easily they could kill us. I have written this about a protagonist who is very much aware of the danger.
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I am not entirely satisfied with the work I find it a bit too long and unfocused.
I tried to sleep
Could only watch
I tried to sleep tight
Could only watch
Tried to dream
Could only watch
I tried to have sweet dreams
Could only watch
The clock botch
And within these walls
Perception flourishes
Like a thousand flowers bloom
Complete with thorns, ribbons,
Raven dust
Lust
All in my sleep
A sleep halted
A stalemate in my subconscious
It makes me feel cornered
Pushed up against my ability to speak
Now I am not only deaf, dumb, and stupid
But also mute
The transformation is complete
– simile, connotations of beauty etc.Like a thousand flowers bloom
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