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Note: I wrote this when I was 6, my mom saved it for me in her hope chest. I did a lot of drawings and I had no idea what paragraphs even were, so to make things easier, I have included the picture and page breaks.
"Kirsten!" Said Charlotte. Charlotte waved at me; I waved back and said hi. She threw a beachball at me because she wanted to play catch. I caught the beachball and threw it back. "Ow!" I said. My foot hurt. So I looked at my foot and saw a necklace. It was sparkly and looked like a mermaid. "Mabey its magickal" I thought. So I put it in my pocket. Then Charlotte accidently threw the ball into the water so I got it. Then I was tired so I told Charlotte I had to go. She was sad. I was happy about the necklace I didn't know what it was. So when I was in my room I put it on and it turned me into a mermaid. I closed my door fast and hoped mom didn't see me. Then I took the necklace off and my legs came back. Mom made me eat dinner but I wanted to go to the beach. She saw I was in a hurry and made me stay longer. I told mom I love you and then I ran to the beach because I wanted to see what would happen if I put on the necklace. I was happy when I got to the beach. The sand felt warm.
(next page)
I put the necklace on and then I had a tale. I crawled into the water and swam to the bottom of the water. I saw pretty fish and other mermaids (picture of mermaids here, next page)
I saw a lot because I liked to swim. I saw lots of things but I was afraid to talk to the mermaids. They scared me because people at my people school didn't like me and I didn't want them to not like me. So I was quiet underwater. I missed my mom because I didn't have a dad. But I liked being a mermaid. But I still missed mom. I had to stop missing mom to feel better. So I did. Fish wanted to play with me but I didn’t want to so I said no. I felt pretty with my tale. I looked just like ariel from the little mermaid. I explored old ships just like ariel but I saw skulls and got scared so I stoped exploring.
(picture of “me” swimming some more and fish asking to play.)
I even saw mermen. They were handsom. So I met one and said hi. He was more handsom then any of the other mermen. The other mermaids were jealous. We swam away together and got maryed and kissed. (picture of mermaid wedding here, next page)
We made a house out of seashells and he kissed me three times and then there were mermaid babies. But Oh no! Then we saw a shark. It was scary and it hurt me. (drawing of shark, next page)
But then a dolphin saved me when I almost died. The dolphin talked to us and he was our friend. His name was Oscar. The dolphin played with all the mermaids because he was nice. Oscar also helped us get food and lived with us. We all lived happily ever after. The End! (drawing of mermaid family with dolphin)
"Kirsten!" Said Charlotte. Charlotte waved at me; I waved back and said hi. She threw a beachball at me because she wanted to play catch. I caught the beachball and threw it back. "Ow!" I said. My foot hurt. So I looked at my foot and saw a necklace. It was sparkly and looked like a mermaid. "Mabey its magickal" I thought. So I put it in my pocket. Then Charlotte accidently threw the ball into the water so I got it. Then I was tired so I told Charlotte I had to go. She was sad. I was happy about the necklace I didn't know what it was. So when I was in my room I put it on and it turned me into a mermaid. I closed my door fast and hoped mom didn't see me. Then I took the necklace off and my legs came back. Mom made me eat dinner but I wanted to go to the beach. She saw I was in a hurry and made me stay longer. I told mom I love you and then I ran to the beach because I wanted to see what would happen if I put on the necklace. I was happy when I got to the beach. The sand felt warm.
(next page)
I put the necklace on and then I had a tale. I crawled into the water and swam to the bottom of the water. I saw pretty fish and other mermaids (picture of mermaids here, next page)
I saw a lot because I liked to swim. I saw lots of things but I was afraid to talk to the mermaids. They scared me because people at my people school didn't like me and I didn't want them to not like me. So I was quiet underwater. I missed my mom because I didn't have a dad. But I liked being a mermaid. But I still missed mom. I had to stop missing mom to feel better. So I did. Fish wanted to play with me but I didn’t want to so I said no. I felt pretty with my tale. I looked just like ariel from the little mermaid. I explored old ships just like ariel but I saw skulls and got scared so I stoped exploring.
(picture of “me” swimming some more and fish asking to play.)
I even saw mermen. They were handsom. So I met one and said hi. He was more handsom then any of the other mermen. The other mermaids were jealous. We swam away together and got maryed and kissed. (picture of mermaid wedding here, next page)
We made a house out of seashells and he kissed me three times and then there were mermaid babies. But Oh no! Then we saw a shark. It was scary and it hurt me. (drawing of shark, next page)
But then a dolphin saved me when I almost died. The dolphin talked to us and he was our friend. His name was Oscar. The dolphin played with all the mermaids because he was nice. Oscar also helped us get food and lived with us. We all lived happily ever after. The End! (drawing of mermaid family with dolphin)
I guess when I was 6 I thought that if you kissed someone three times in a row you had babies...? hahaha. Don't judge me. Oh and Charlotte is Charli. Charli is just much cooler. Thanks Sparks!!!
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