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Fri Jun 06, 2014 2:09 am
dragonfphoenix says...



I have something I like, but I haven't decided which of the two I'm going with yet.
Entries pending: Hannibal: A Hero and Thunder and Ice

Tags @JamesHunt @Wolfare1 @ongoeslife @Storybraniac Any help greatly appreciated! Thanks!
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Fri Jun 06, 2014 7:12 am
ongoeslife says...



I'm SO hesitant about this 'cause I'm not sure what style would be acceptable. D= Is it supposed to be a narrative about the particular incident, telling what happened? Can it be a storyish thing told from the voice of a person involved, voluntarily or not?
  





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Fri Jun 06, 2014 8:08 am
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retrodisco666 says...



Here is my entry, one of the hardest pieces I had to write but here is it;

Pink triangles.

*note i've edited the ending*
Last edited by retrodisco666 on Fri Jun 06, 2014 2:16 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Fri Jun 06, 2014 11:36 am
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ongoeslife says...



So, an all-nighter produced this: Vryheidsoorloë-- The Freedom Wars

Let's hope it's worth those seven hours I put into it!!
  





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Fri Jun 06, 2014 1:33 pm
LadySpark says...



@dragonfphoenix, have you decided which one yet?
hush, my sweet
these tornadoes are for you


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Fri Jun 06, 2014 2:10 pm
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BrumalHunter says...



It is with a heavy heart that I present to you the epitaphs of the recently deceased. *sniffs* @Wolfare1, you will be missed! However, I wish @dragonfphoenix the best of luck! (What say you the two of us come in second and first place?) Also, I have decided that the epitaphs of @verymaryanna and @Buggiedude2340 were ineffective, so I have updated them.

Here lies verymaryanna
She died in a very merry sleep.

Here lies Buggiedude2340
She was scared to death of the Hunger Games.

Here lies Wolfare1
To end her prolonged suffering, she was put down.

Here lies Strange
Black Magic always comes at a price.


Also, @Blackwood , don't take this the wrong way, but it's a pity you didn't die; your epitaph would have been so much fun to write. So I wrote it anyway:

Here lies Blackwood
A violinist pushed him and his viola off a cliff.


(Sorry, I couldn't resist - orchestral jokes are really sardonic, but hilarious.)
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Fri Jun 06, 2014 3:43 pm
dragonfphoenix says...



@SparkToFlame I may be gone this afternoon before the deadline, so since I'm really good at being indecisive, and I like both the pieces, if I don't update this post,... My entry is Thunder and Ice
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Fri Jun 06, 2014 8:13 pm
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TimmyJake says...



When do we find out our scores?
No hurry. Just curious. :D
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Fri Jun 06, 2014 9:18 pm
Blackwood says...



@JamesHunt I think something along the lines of being pushed off a cliff and then crushed by a massive metal tuba would be more appropriate.

You sort of scared me for a minute, I thought I had been killed off for some unknown reason.
Hahah....haha.....ahahaha.
  





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Fri Jun 06, 2014 9:27 pm
Willard says...



I don't quite get that whole Black Magic thing but okay

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Fri Jun 06, 2014 10:08 pm
BrumalHunter says...



@Blackwood - I apologise if I made you start. Also, for some unknown reason, violinists are extremely condescending towards players of the viola. (E.g. they feel violist play the viola because they were not good enough to play the violin.) - I base all of my epitaphs on either the Tribute's final entry, or posts related to them/that they have made.

@Strange - As I told BlackWood, my epitaphs are based on either the Tribute's final entry, or posts related to them/that they have made. Your epitaph is therefore based on your magic-related final entry.
But the Fruit of the Spirit is love, joy, peace, longsuffering, gentleness, goodness, faith, meekness, temperance: against such there is no law.
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Winter is inevitable. Spring will return eventually, and AstralHunter with it.
  








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