Young Writers Society

Sir, I've decided to offer only one review this time, as it's a rather lengthy one. If this is unacceptable, I'll submit more.

Fences (chapt. 1 Renewed Anger)

ulala8 wrote:Sir, I've decided to offer only one review this time, as it's a rather lengthy one. If this is unacceptable, I'll submit more.

Fences (chapt. 1 Renewed Anger)

It's fine. I'd think that it's more efficient to receive tags in bulk, but you can do it anyway you'd like!

For PFC Ulala8:

1. Thorough assault - Green Room Review - 9 tags

Total: 9 tags

Private First Class -> Specialist (11/20 tags)

Private, Rhiasofia, Advanced English 2 years, AP English one year.

OFFICIAL GAAF DOCUMENTATION FORM(ASSAULTS) OF PFC Ulala:

1. Baloo and Koru: The Real Jungle Book Bears
2. Waterfall - Page 1 Part 2

ulala8 wrote:OFFICIAL GAAF DOCUMENTATION FORM(ASSAULTS) OF PFC Ulala:

1. Baloo and Koru: The Real Jungle Book Bears
2. Waterfall - Page 1 Part 2

For PFC Ulala8:

1. Thorough assault - Green Room Review - Deduction: 2 tags - 7 tags
COMMENTS: Remember, you shouldn't only include grammatical errors in your reviews.

2. Moderate assault - Green Room Review - 7 tags

Total: 14 tags

Private First Class -> Specialist (20/20)
Specialist -> Corporal (5/25)

"Great work, soldier. Remember that your duty to these writers doesn't only lie with grammar. Keep it up, though."

Pvt. Dahk, Two years of Grammar, as well as collective knowledge.

rhiasofia wrote:Private, Rhiasofia, Advanced English 2 years, AP English one year.

Dakushau wrote:Pvt. Dahk, Two years of Grammar, as well as collective knowledge.

Welcome to the Alliance.

Pvt. Ell15: two years of seminar English, three years of being called a Grammar Nazi by my friends and family, and a lifetime of Googling grammar topics I don't understand. I'm ready.

Pvt. Magpie, English Major and high school paper editor, reporting for duty.

OFFICIAL GAAF DOCUMENTATION FORM(ASSAULTS) OF SPC Ulala:

1. Golden Bird, Red Fox: Chapter one
2. Immanuel's Veins

ulala8 wrote:OFFICIAL GAAF DOCUMENTATION FORM(ASSAULTS) OF SPC Ulala:

1. Golden Bird, Red Fox: Chapter one
2. Immanuel's Veins

For Sergeant Ulala:

1. Moderate assault - Normal Review - 3 tags
2. Thorough assault - Normal Review - 5 tags

Total: 8 tags

Sergeant -> Staff Sergeant (8/40 tags )

rhiasofia wrote:http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=107833&c=450801#c450801

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=108667#c450413

For Private rhiasofia:

1. Moderate assault (Poetry) - Normal Review - 3 tags
2. Little assault (Poetry) - Normal Review - 1 tag

Total: 4 tags

Private E-1 -> Private E-2 (4/10 tags )

Since I have absolutely no idea how this works.....S.A.M