Young Writers Society

OFFICIAL GAAF DOCUMENTATION FORM(ASSAULTS) OF SERGEANT ULALA:

1. Labels
2. Monk's Neknomination 1
3. Untitled: Chapter 1
4. The Story Of Not
5. I will Not call you Father
6. She Thief
7. The Shifties: Chapter 1 - Lost

This is still alive, men (and women)! I'll be on temporary hiatus from this--lots and lots of homework. So, until then, I appoint @ulala8 to be my replacement until I return to the swing of things!

-GOA Dd.

ddman18 wrote:This is still alive, men (and women)! I'll be on temporary hiatus from this--lots and lots of homework. So, until then, I appoint @ulala8 to be my replacement until I return to the swing of things!

-GOA Dd.

Yes sir!

Rhia Sofia's review:

1. 2 (This
2. 2 (And this are reviews that GOA Dd never got to)
3. 5
4. 4
5. (This one really doesn't deserve anything for grammatical purposes, but since you gave a nice review of the piece, I'll give you honourary points) 2
6. 7
7. 2
8. 2 (Two hyphens used together is supposed to be a dash. Published authours use them like that if they can't get a dash.)

Replacement General of Army Ulala called Rhia into Dd's office, where she was residing for the time being. She was lounging back in the plush leather chair (of which she could be seen sinking into quite a bit), hands folded before her and elbows resting upon the armrests. She brought the chair forward slightly as Rhia entered the office and she stood. She shook the soldier's hand before sitting once more in the re-positioned chair.
"I've heard a lot of good things about you, Private Rhia," she greeted, a smile blossoming upon her pink lips. "The soldiers weren't exaggerating. You've been doing remarkably, and progressing quickly. I apologize on Dd's behalf for the two missions that went unnoticed.
"While on that note, I am pleased to inform you that you have been promoted to Private E-2. Congratulations."

To Private First Class: 14/20

*Salutes* "Thank you, Ma'am"

Back with a grammar report

Goodbye, And I'll See You Soon

Low Place Like Home - Chapter 3

Liar, Liar

Sorceress: Chapter 5

The Dangers of Time

One single human emotion

words to the shadows

It's all so...realistic

Paparazzi promises

Rhia Sofia's Review:

1. 2
2. 5
3. 3
4. 2
5. 2
6. 3
7. 5
8. 3
9. 3

Ranks Achieved: Private First Class, Specialist

12/25

I apologize for the mistake that I made on your previous report. It has been fixed.