So..I am a sucker for cliches, and presently I am writing a story in which the the female protagonist is being assaulted by a drunk stranger, and the male protagonist comes in time to save her.
So the last I wrote was her staring at his back as he stood in front of her protectively.
Now, I am confused as to how to pen down the scene from there on.
Both the characters are not in love; the man has feelings for the girl, but the girl does not. Both have trust issues, however they are just starting to learn how to trust each other and be civil to each other.
The guy is an angry type of a man, however he has started controlling his anger around the girl, and the girl is now starting to understand him better.
Oh and they are married
So pretty much all cliches rolled into one
Any tips?
I wanted a scene in which the girl (K) steps up to the guy (A) and begs him to leave the drunk man alone and to leave cause she fears for their safety.
In a realistic scenario, this is what I imagine would happen...if a guy stepped up to beat up someone else, a person would intervene and ask them to leave it and forget about it.
Except...I am really unable to pen down the part properly. I have written several drafts of it, and I am unhappy with each.
I want to get the anger of A across, but at the same time I want to get his concern for K mingled in as well. Also for K, I want her concern, relief, fear everything being shined through.
I don't know how to do this -_- *headdesk*
If I have posted the wrong kind of question on this forum, I apologise
Thanks for your help in advance!
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