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Wed Dec 28, 2005 3:32 am
Fishr says...



Lately I have been writing nonstop, (Well I do make time to hydrate and eat and sleep, lol) and remembering old tactics that helped me in a jam. So here is another technique that may or may not help with character development. The mirror can be your best friend.

I suggest to lock yourself in a room, because you may feel foolish, I know I do, lol. But if I'm not sure how my charactor's should act, according to the situation, I stand in front of a mirror and literally make faces of how I picture the char reacting. Sometimes I will bunch fists and shake them at my reflection, jump up and down, move from side to side; everything.

This way when I write, I don't "over do" the situation, which I have a tendency to do, :lol: . I can keep it as realistic as possible.

Hope I didn't confuse anyone, hehe. And I hope this might help someone out if their not sure how a char should react. Have fun! :lol:
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Wed Dec 28, 2005 3:49 am
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This is great advice, but it's hard to do for me because I always feel so stupid. Once when I was acting out a scene from a story, my younger sisters walked in and got these really weird looks on their faces, like, "Okay, she's lost it." They asked me what the heck I was doing, and I tried to explain, but they still thought I was off my rocker.

But it's especially good for facial expressions. Sometimes I'll look in the mirror and read a line and see what my face does and it'll give me some ideas.
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Wed Dec 28, 2005 6:40 am
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I do that all the time. Also i do vioces so i know tem exacrly and able to come up with unique dilects. My faverate is Sister's, "Scusee come hewre i weawwy want to sow oo somefink" thats the way she talks.
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Wed Dec 28, 2005 11:01 pm
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I do it automatically when I'm writing, hehe. It's strange. So when I'm writing and am on a webcam, then people often wonder about my facial expressions...

Which leads me to the other point. Another good idea is, if you have a webcam, find a YWS member whom you can trust, and then show him your facial expressions and ask him to describe it for you. :)
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Thu Dec 29, 2005 8:41 pm
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Which leads me to the other point. Another good idea is, if you have a webcam, find a YWS member whom you can trust, and then show him your facial expressions and ask him to describe it for you.
I'm not that brave, yet. :D

I do that all the time. Also i do vioces so i know tem exacrly and able to come up with unique dilects.
Hmm, at the risk of living up to my signature, I have actual conversations, lol. In which case, I have to write or do something to keep them subdued.

This is great advice, but it's hard to do for me because I always feel so stupid. Once when I was acting out a scene from a story, my younger sisters walked in and got these really weird looks on their faces, like, "Okay, she's lost it." They asked me what the heck I was doing, and I tried to explain, but they still thought I was off my rocker.

But it's especially good for facial expressions. Sometimes I'll look in the mirror and read a line and see what my face does and it'll give me some ideas.
I've been off my rocker since birth, lol. ;) But I try to still "appear" sane. Whoever invented locks, should be highly praised.
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Thu Dec 29, 2005 9:14 pm
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Amen, LOL. :D
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Sat Dec 31, 2005 10:54 am
NikkuhPrease says...



No way!!! I do that too.
  





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Mon Jan 02, 2006 2:59 am
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*laughs* I do this kind of thing... I try to have a mirror somewhere in the room when I'm writing, or, if it's dark outside and I try to be by a window because they become very reflective at night. And I talk to myself and listen to how I say things. And when people walk in while I'm writing I quickly turn red and hide.

The one thing I've learned through all this? To be a writer, you've got to make sure you don't mind when people think you're insane.
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Mon Jan 02, 2006 4:16 am
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I have two full-length-and-beyond mirrors in my bedroom (which makes it private) to occupy myself. I've always acted things out in front of a mirror, just for fun, and I don't see much wrong with it. It's a good tool. I used to be in theatre (I got self-conscious *sigh*), and we were told to do that sometimes, to see our expressions. I didn't think of doing that to write, though. I usually draw pictures, myself--I doodle in my notebook. I draw a character, and think about how to describe his/her/its expression, or I draw a map or a place...But a mirror is almost the same thing.

I'm not insane. I'm just creative. :D
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Mon Jan 02, 2006 6:21 am
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I'm like Snoink, I do it without thinking. Mercifully, I don't own a webcam, lol. Although it would be funny to see how someone discribes my face.
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Mon Jan 02, 2006 7:01 am
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I just watch people- it's awesome, since you get such a range of dysfunctionality and emotion. I have the Driven-Mad-Soccer-Mom expressions down pat from spending a really extremely boring summer volunteering at the children's Zoo. :P
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Mon Jan 02, 2006 7:04 am
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Watching people is fun. I've also learned to start paying attention to my own facial idosyncrasies. For example, I've learned that I scrunch up my face when I'm confused, and I wrinkle up my nose right before something makes me laugh.
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Mon Jan 02, 2006 5:12 pm
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I people watch all the time. That never occurred to me I had loads of facial expressions at my disposal. I always did it for fun, and let me tell you all, that there are some very weird people in my neck of the woods.
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Thu Mar 27, 2008 3:50 am
Rakun says...



I will send you a private message as soon I do it tomorrow telling the results.
Thanks for the piece of advice.
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Thu Mar 27, 2008 8:37 pm
Heidigirl666 says...



I don't use a mirror, but I do it without thinking while I'm at my computer or have a notebook open and I'm writing, I make faces and talk to myself. I thought it was just me who did that! :D

Thank God I'm not as mentally unbalanced as I thought I was... :roll: :smt003
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