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Wed Aug 29, 2007 7:36 pm
Cpt. Smurf says...



Are you worried that one of your characters is a Mary-Sue? Well, if that's the case, you can take the Mary-Sue Litmus Test. The higher you score, the more of a Mary-Sue your character is. I should remind you that the test is no guarantee, and only serves as a guideline, an aid for character development, if you will.

Have fun testing your characters! Perhaps, when you're done, you could share your score?
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Wed Aug 29, 2007 8:10 pm
Meep says...



I posted a link to one of these in the "Character Development" usergroup recently. I find them handy and amusing.

If you're lazy (or suck at math, like me), there's a check-box version here that calculates your score for you. Just click the box if the answer is yes, and it'll do the rest.
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Wed Aug 29, 2007 8:16 pm
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tinny says...



Muaha! I have to do the checkbox one or I'm always tempted to cheat on these things >.> But my newest character only got 11, which makes me happy ^^
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Wed Aug 29, 2007 9:33 pm
gyrfalcon says...



Lol, one of mine got a 67! (Kivan, BotS)

EDIT: and another got a 2
Last edited by gyrfalcon on Wed Aug 29, 2007 10:31 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Wed Aug 29, 2007 9:44 pm
Sumi H. Inkblot says...



Yay, Miea only got 15. ^_^
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Wed Aug 29, 2007 10:02 pm
Meep says...



The (main) character I play in "the arepee" with my friend Baz came out with a score of 87. :D (Then again, when in doubt, I checked yes.)

I'd bet all of the characters in that would score pretty high, though. (Fanservice on both of our parts.)
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Thu Aug 30, 2007 12:51 am
DancingRain says...



My character Ayla got 10
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Thu Aug 30, 2007 1:10 am
Teague says...



Somehow one of my characters got a 0. O.o
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Thu Aug 30, 2007 1:12 am
Aet Lindling says...



Oh, I did this. I was amazing, my characters were 4 and 7. One got 3 more because her eyes were green.

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And now you'll all hate me. :D
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Thu Aug 30, 2007 9:51 am
Twit says...



Rohsair got 14, and I can't believe it, but the Raven got 28!!

That's crazy, as I know that she's not a Sue, so I took it again and she got 20. With some things they give, there isn't an option for the one I want, so I'll um and ah over what to put. :?
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Thu Aug 30, 2007 11:19 am
flytodreams says...



Rhen got a 64. :cry:
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Thu Aug 30, 2007 12:39 pm
Meep says...



ShadowTwit wrote:Rohsair got 14, and I can't believe it, but the Raven got 28!!

That's crazy, as I know that she's not a Sue, so I took it again and she got 20. With some things they give, there isn't an option for the one I want, so I'll um and ah over what to put. :?

Don't feel too badly about it. In the check-box version, they mention that Morpheus (from the Sandman comics) got 70, but they don't think he's a Stu. Some characters just score high, but what really, really matters is how you write them. Even the most obnoxious Mary Sue ever could be okay if the writing was good.
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Fri Aug 31, 2007 8:20 am
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Seth only got 7, whereas Elayna got 52! If it hand't been for mental handicaps, then she would have been uber-sue. But they didn't inlcude some things that would have lowered her score by about 10. Still, i always knew she was a bit of a mary-sue, but the way I write for her doesn't show it obviously.
  





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Fri Aug 31, 2007 8:41 am
Poor Imp says...



Er, rather amusing test.

Tov got a -5. I suppose that clears things ^_^
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Fri Aug 31, 2007 4:46 pm
Kylan says...



My newest character got a 12. Not bad...

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