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Sat Feb 01, 2014 5:00 am
calenwric says...



Hey, everybody! I'm new, and I decided to post my first chapter here (among other websites like critiquecircle.com and fictionpress.com), since I heard it is extremely important to have both critique groups and beta readers read and help you improve your work.

Well, why not? Would you care to give a shot at the first chapter to my Fantasy (Spiritual) story?

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Sat Feb 01, 2014 6:03 pm
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Hey! Welcome to YWS! You'll love it here! & I do believe I just reviewed your chapter. :D

Highly recommend it guys! Go and read it. :)

If you ever have any questions about the site, feel free to PM me or anyone else dressed in this bright green atire!

Olive <3
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Sat Feb 01, 2014 8:10 pm
calenwric says...



OliveDreams wrote:Hey! Welcome to YWS! You'll love it here! & I do believe I just reviewed your chapter. :D

Highly recommend it guys! Go and read it. :)

If you ever have any questions about the site, feel free to PM me or anyone else dressed in this bright green atire!

Olive <3

Yay! Thank you so much for reviewing! :mrgreen:
  





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Sat Feb 01, 2014 8:40 pm
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Welcome to YWS! It's great to have you here. If you ever want to talk to someone, you're welcome to come to me. I love to talk! :D
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Sat Feb 01, 2014 8:41 pm
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Hey, welcome to YWS! :D

It's always lovely gaining new members. It's like Christmas or something! ^-^

Feel free to PM me or any of the other guys in green or red if you need any help or have any questions!

Happy YWSing,

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Sat Feb 01, 2014 8:43 pm
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Hey, welcome to YWS. If you have any questions let me know!
  





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Sun Feb 02, 2014 5:35 am
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Welcome to the YWS! ^^
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Sun Feb 02, 2014 7:48 am
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Welcome to the site!
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Sun Feb 02, 2014 11:35 pm
Demeter says...



Hey Calenwric! YWS is totally better than any of those other sites. ;) Hope you've noticed that already, hehe!

Welcome! Hope you like it here!
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Mon Feb 03, 2014 1:47 am
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calenwric says...



Demeter wrote:Hey Calenwric! YWS is totally better than any of those other sites. ;) Hope you've noticed that already, hehe!

Welcome! Hope you like it here!

Haha, I can see you're all very friendly. :smt003 I really am in love with this site ever since I joined!
  





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Mon Feb 03, 2014 5:25 pm
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Welcome to YWS! I know that you will like it here a lot! Feel free to as questions, though I am not much of a professional here either. ;)
Spoiler! :
It's a tiny little mystery, that makes no sense to me...
  





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Wed Feb 05, 2014 10:08 am
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Welcome to YWS!! :D
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Thu Feb 13, 2014 11:20 pm
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Welcome! :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-)
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Tue Feb 18, 2014 8:50 pm
horrendous says...



getting reviews is very rewarding on this site, isn't it? most members are knowledgeable and helpful, since they're writers themselves. my name is horrendous. i'm horrendous.
hor·ren·dous
adjective: shockingly dreadful; horrible
synonyms: appalling, frightful, hideous

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