Hello! I just joined this great website, The Young Writer's Society, which is truly a great outlet for young authors and writers. I'm not even sure that I am doing these things right and if anyone is reading this now. I hope that I can rack up some points and hopefully get some reviews. I just wrote Mirage, a poem, so please check it out and write me some reviews! I joined this site/club/society to improve and advance my writing. I hope to become a great member here and get to know you all!
Spoiler! :
It's a tiny little mystery, that makes no sense to me...
Hey! Welcome to YWS and great reviewing! You've done a lot of reviews in your short time here. This is the YWS critique sandwich! It will give you a good idea of how to write a review. This is a more in-depth article on reviewing. ^^ If you see anyone around the site with a colorful name, feel free to ask them anything about YWS.
I joined this site/club/society to improve and advance my writing.
Wonderful! This is what YWS is all about! I know I've learned a TON since I've joined! Feel free to roam around and look at the different forum, or pop into the chatroom and say hi!
Instead, he said, Brother! I know your hunger. To this, the Wolf answered, Lo!
Thank you for being so welcoming. I am glad to know that we can all be real and friendly here--even behind the computer screen. I did a lot of reviewing because that was all I really knew, but I just wrote a poem, my first writing submitted, Mirage, so if you want to read, please do. If you have any criticism or points of interest, please let me know in a review or comment... Thanks again!
~ Magenta
Spoiler! :
It's a tiny little mystery, that makes no sense to me...
Don't say you don't have enough time. You have exactly the same number of hours per day that were given to Helen Keller, Pasteur, Michaelangelo, Mother Teresa, Leonardo da Vinci, Thomas Jefferson, and Albert Einstein. — H. Jackson Brown
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Reviews: 179