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Tue Mar 27, 2007 11:01 pm
DragonKore says...



I've been looking around for a website to post my work and receive feedback, and I hope this is a good place to do it. I previously used deviantART, but eventually realized that it's definitely more geared towards art than writing.

Anyhow, it's nice meeting all of you.



Oh, and I hope my writing doesn't disturb anyone too much.
  





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Tue Mar 27, 2007 11:05 pm
Emerson says...



Oh, and I hope my writing doesn't disturb anyone too much.


*giggles innocently* If I haven't sent one person into trauma yet, I doubt you will either. What do you write about? I can just be obscene/violent/perverse, and yet lovely at the same time ^_^

Back to the subject:
Bonjour et Bienvenue! This is a wonderful site for getting better at writing, I have improved so much since coming here. And, it's full of friendly people! (Like me? :lol:)

If you have any questions about the site, or get lost, go right ahead and PM me and I'll help you out with all you need :-D

Be sure to read the Rules, FAQS and other randomly stickied things that are nice to read.

Have fun!
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Tue Mar 27, 2007 11:10 pm
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Hullo DragonKore and welcome to YWS -- all that that implies being good naturally. ^_^

It is, without a doubt, an excellent place for receiving feedback on writing. And disturb? ^_~ Oy, no, unlikely.

Though Mlle. Claudette dissembles slightly. She traumatised me, I'm afraid, for life with her poetry. ^_~

Welcome again. If you've any questions or if you ever need a comment on something you've posted, feel free to PM me. The rest of the mods are also, on the whole, entirely helpful. ^_^




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Tue Mar 27, 2007 11:13 pm
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Two replies already? I'm impressed.

I'll go post a story real quickly so that you guys can get a taste.
  





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Tue Mar 27, 2007 11:16 pm
Jennafina says...



Hey DragonKore! Is there something shorter we can call you? (DK?)

I never liked DevART, even for art. I usually got praise, instead of anything really constructive.

If you have any questions about YWS send me a PM and I'll get back to you right away. :)

Ooh! Disturbing writing! What type of stuff is it?

Thanks for joining! I hope you like the site.

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Tue Mar 27, 2007 11:21 pm
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Thanks for the great welcoming. DK is what a lot of people call me, so go right ahead. I made this username years ago and I just can't bear to part with it. :p

Anyhow, here are my first two submissions:

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Tue Mar 27, 2007 11:28 pm
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Okay, DK! By the way, there's a rule here that says you should review two things by other people for each story you post. They can be anything-- stories, poems, art.

Thanks. :)

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Tue Mar 27, 2007 11:30 pm
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I know, I was just about to do that actually. :wink:
  





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Tue Mar 27, 2007 11:34 pm
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I read and critiqued one; wasn't that bad. merely sentences of vulgarity.

Anyway, What I was planning on saying: Don't forget to review two things before submitting your own work :-D

EDIT: Oops, Jenna beat me to it. Us mods are so pretentious...
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Hey there DragonKore! Welcome to YWS!
  





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Wed Mar 28, 2007 1:30 am
Sumi H. Inkblot says...



Welcome to the YWS! Konbanwa!

DragonKore wrote:Oh, and I hope my writing doesn't disturb anyone too much.


:Can't help laughing a bit: I seriously doubt you will annoy anybody. You won't annoy me. :lol: But there are the odd bumpkins that can get annoyed at a wrong word. Whoops. I hope none of them read that. :lol:
Anyway, welcome aboard! I hope you enjoy the site!
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Wed Mar 28, 2007 4:38 am
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Baroness Ink wrote:Welcome to the YWS! Konbanwa!
~Sumi


こんばんは。日本語が 話せますか?o.o
  





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Wed Mar 28, 2007 8:50 pm
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Hi there and welcome!!! Like pretty much everyone else said, I doubt your writing will disturb anyone, provided you put the proper rating on it. Now you need a gift, and since gift-giving is my unofficial job, here you go: :D :) :( :o :shock: :? 8) :lol: :x :P :oops: :cry: :evil: :twisted: :roll: :wink: :!: :?: :idea: :arrow: :| :mrgreen: :elephant: :D :) :( :o :shock: :? 8) :lol: :x :P :oops: :cry: :evil: :twisted: :roll: :wink: :!: :?: :idea: :arrow: :| :mrgreen: :elephant:
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Wed Mar 28, 2007 9:08 pm
Sumi H. Inkblot says...



Haha. Japanese. XD
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Thu Mar 29, 2007 2:42 am
DragonKore says...



niteowl wrote:Hi there and welcome!!! Like pretty much everyone else said, I doubt your writing will disturb anyone, provided you put the proper rating on it. Now you need a gift, and since gift-giving is my unofficial job, here you go: :D :) :( :o :shock: :? 8) :lol: :x :P :oops: :cry: :evil: :twisted: :roll: :wink: :!: :?: :idea: :arrow: :| :mrgreen: :elephant: :D :) :( :o :shock: :? 8) :lol: :x :P :oops: :cry: :evil: :twisted: :roll: :wink: :!: :?: :idea: :arrow: :| :mrgreen: :elephant:


Why, thank you. ^_^

Baroness Ink wrote:Haha. Japanese. XD


I had hopes that you could read it. :(
  








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