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by bryan in Dramatic Poetry
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Bohemia Island (R)

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PostPosted: Fri Sep 01, 2006 6:44 pm    Post subject: Bohemia Island (R) Reply with quote

bohemia island

full of nercophiliac bride seekers

in a surge of screaming rhapsodies



whispering schemes to the dwellers of serene green

the hills are alive with zombie villagers

they've been infected with boom boom fever



watch out for bermuda shorts

watch out for barabado's lingerie

watch out for moon's gamma rays

watch out for boom boom fever coming alive again



the villagers dancing in decadence

the bonfire grows with deceit



the faces of nude women and men displaying themselves

like wax figures lost in a sea fire



pollinating themselves

like genocide in a sea of extinction



bohemia island

enjoy the kills

enjoy the thrills



enjoy the toxins in the water

we want you to love the fear

we want you to become a martyr 



boom boom fever make them all dance

make them all walk off bohemia island

into the deep abyss of bliss 



kiss your dead partner

kiss the giant tourists

kiss the tiny martinis

kiss the burning piano and let it drop 

into the volacano of burning misery



and we'll sing about it while in the shower



bohemia island take me away with boom boom fever
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PostPosted: Sat Sep 02, 2006 4:31 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

This seems more like the lyrics of a song than narrative poetry IMO Razz Parts of it were a little gross, necrophilia isn't my thing..I'm sure you could say the same about my love story though lol!

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