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Random Character Sketches
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yoha_ahoy
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 Posted: Sat Apr 29, 2006 8:04 pm Post subject: Random Character Sketches |
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I've recently discovered a talent for drawing random characters. So here are my first few that I've done. Any constructive critisism is welcome. Thanks! 
This one is the only character that isn't random. She's my main character in my NaNoNovel. Name is Chloe.
This is... um, a girl. Obviously, I hope. Nothin' much to say about her. I made her up on the spot cuz I was bored. Her weapon thing is some little idea I came up with... it's just some sort of "energy staff" with glowing blue strips. *shrug*
Hmm... yup. Random guy with redish-orange hair.
That's all for now. Those are all my half decent ones. I might post more as I go. Enjoy! |
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| Posted: Sat Apr 29, 2006 8:33 pm Post subject: |
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| wow thats really good drawing yoha ahoy really good colouring as well :thumb: |
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| I like them, but the only thing I really have a problem with is the 1st girl's arm. In fontrast to her other arm, it looks inflated. If you meant to do that, because maybe she's been lifting weights, that's ok, but compared to the rest of her body, it really doesn't make sense. |
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| Posted: Thu May 04, 2006 10:20 am Post subject: |
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| I like the girls. The guy looks wrong. His feet should be facing the front and so should his head because the body and legs are. |
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| Posted: Thu May 04, 2006 4:23 pm Post subject: |
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i love the way you did the folds on the shirts and jeans  |
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