"Damn mom stay out of my business you don't need to know every place that I go" yelled Sam.
"Go to your room you should have told me it is 3:30 in the morning I could do nothing but worry, go to your room we will talk in the morning" replies his mother.
Why she cant be like any other mom she never gets off my back. I hate her so much even if I did tell her where I was it would not have made a difference. I hope she dies then I could do whatever I wanted, that would be the good life. She is such a bitch sometimes I can't take it anymore she is only holding me back from my life and does nothing to try and fix it, I think I should run away then I would not have to worry about her nagging me any more. I don't know I'll think about it tomorrow not now jut time to sleep for me.
It is too hot to sleep, but what else can I do she wont let me do anything. What was that? The freaking bed is moving, it is falling "AHH HELP". All I could see was swirling lights pass my face and the wind flying by. When I landed I was on a dark street with lots of garbage every where and a couple bums curled in the corners of houses. I got up but as soon as I did a guy came and grabbed me and took me into a house.
I did not know weather to be screaming or struggling but I did neither because I was too afraid to even move. The guy threw me down in a chair and lit a candle. He closed the raged certain and sat down and stared at me. I was going to ask where I was but I was too afraid to make out noise. We sat there for a moment and he finally said something.
"Do you recognize me" asked the guy.
"No, where are we and why am I here" replied Sam.
"Sam you should know, remember the party, how you yelled at your mom" said the man.
"Yes so what she is a bad mother, how do you know my name" sniffles as he breathes in dust.
"No she is not she is all you have you can not sin her you must love her" yells the guy.
"I don't need to listen to you I have my own choices" Sam yells back.
"Yea I said the same exact thing" he says while closing his eyes
"What do you mean you are starting to freak me out" Sam replies with a confused look on his face.
"I thought you would recognize your self but then again you have lost most of your memory in the alcohol" the guy replies
"You sound crazy are you trying to say you are me" replies as he points to him ten back to himself.
"Bingo you win you are exactly right I'm you" replies Sam from the future
"You are a freak you must be out of your mind" Sam says.
"Look at me this is you if you stop loving your mom, not a very good life because if I am correct she will die when you are only seventeen and what are you now sixteen" asked future Sam.
"No you must be lying" yelled Sam.
"Nope look at the facts, you are right this is your life and you can choose how you live it and I will let you do that but now that you know what your hatred will lead to I can let you go home I have nothing else to say" said future Sam.
"You have got to be kidding me that is not true" snickered Sam.
"Fine need a little preview" asks future Sam
"Fine try me" laughed Sam
Then the room disappeared and he was gone when I looked down I was dressed all in black why? I was at a funeral, my own mothers funeral. I started to scream and ask how she died but their was no answers every one just kept weeping. Did I cause this was this all my fault? No that is nonsense how could I end up killing my own mother? Then I seen my future self behind everyone. I ran up to him and began to scream
"Is that enough proof for you" he asked.
"how could you, how could you kill her" screamed while crying.
"So you do care that is all I have to know" he smiled back.
Just the the falling began one more and the wind came and I was in mid fall. I was back in my room but how? Was it all a dream, no I know is wasn't. Even if it was it was way to hard to take lightly. Wait where is mom?
"Mom where are you I am so sorry I did not mean to say those things, I am so stupid" yelled Sam.
"Don't try to suck up, are you ready to tell me where you where you where".
"Yes mom I would love to" replied Sam while smiling.
"Ohh yea and, sorry mom" said Sam.
. Lol, it was funny. However, you have a lot of little errors that need to be fixed.
