To clear up all my plot bunnies I've decided to do a series of little poem/stories. Hopefully my Mum will be illustrating them. I just want some help with punctuation and maybe tidying up a few verses as my Mum suggests that towards the end it tails off a little. So I welcome opinions!
‘Where does wind come from?’
A small girl asked her mother,
Eyes twinkling and curious,
As she looked at the adult above her.
‘The wind you ask?
Now there’s a tale,
And if you listen closely,
I’ll tell it without fail.”
At the end of the ocean,
Where the sea meets the sky,
Is a very special island,
That floats way up high.
A race of people there lives,
Hidden from me and you,
They go about their business,
And are experts at what they do.
Who are these people?
You might ask.
They are The Wind Keepers,
But what is their task?
On calm nights,
Just before dawn,
They skim across the sky,
With their nets drawn.
They swoop high,
They swoop low,
Catching the air,
With the best flow.
Then just before you wake,
And your dreams drift away,
The Wind Keepers return,
To the island where they stay.
They store their catch,
In a hollow tree,
But what they do there,
Is a secret to me.
But whenever I feel a breeze,
Or the wind in my hair,
I know that The Wind Keepers,
Have been catching their air.
‘And so little one,
Off to bed,
Or The Wind Keepers will come,
And catch you instead!’
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