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Nicole Hutchings

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Posted: Tue Mar 14, 2006 8:08 pm Post subject: Nicole Hutchings

I thought I saw standing inside heavens door a face, ohhh a face a face I hadn't seen before could it be the anger in my heart is taking over me and nothing, woah nothing is going right in my mind I'm sure you've noticed me the way you stand and stare the way you look as though I've died but you don't know the truth surely there is nothing you can do the tears fly and I notice I hadn't seen this side of you and it's gone it's too late for me to say goodbye it's too late for you to save me like you had done before. The bullet wound has pierced my heart blood will flow the rivers start I know you've never cried to me before do you need a hand do you need a heart will you need someone to tell you how lucky you are could I spread my wings why don't I return It isn't just me I thought I loved you much more Your tears are poison I have to admit your suffering is starting to make me submit but as I look upon heavens door I realise it's too late for me to do more I want to return but my heart says go on I will leave you to find someone better than me -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- a song I wrote about my ex
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Posted: Tue Mar 14, 2006 8:56 pm Post subject:

very nice the bit i liked was do you need a hand do you need a heart will you need someone to tell you how lucky you are could I spread my wings why don't I return It isn't just me I thought I loved you much more very cool is your ex charlotte just wanted to know

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