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Chapter two
The next morning was painful. Waking up and remembering that I had almost nothing, that all of my possessions and all of the people I knew were gone, was a bitter experience. At least I still had Dean, since nothing could separate a person from their Chi. I glanced at him, and he looked back worriedly. It was clear he was in almost as much pain as I was, but noticing that he seemed concerned, I decided to try and hide my emotions. Hiding your feelings from someone who has been around you since you were born however, is difficult even for someone with a good poker face. It was no surprise to me why he was worried though; it had been almost a day since we last spoke, which was an astonishing change of pace from our usual telepathic conversations every few minutes.
"Do you have a plan?" he asked cautiously, breaking our prolonged silence.
"What do you mean?"
"Well, there's a whole raiding party in between us and this Kane guy, so I think we should have a plan before we run in and get killed."
"Oh, yeah, I guess you're right. How about we attack in the middle of the night?"
"What happens when they wake up?"
"They'll be dead before that happens," I responded coldly.
"Sounds like a plan."
For the first time since my home was destroyed, I thought about Dean's feelings. I felt selfish thinking about how much he was concerned about me, and how little I had thought about how this must have affected him. Being practically the same person, he was probably also feeling the emptiness that I was feeling. Dean had always been the more emotional of the two of us, and for better or for worse, contrasted with my more calm logical personality. Whenever I was nervous about talking to girls, Dean was the one who would convince me, using inspiring words as his eyes began to light up with an idea. Whenever I was challenged to a fistfight by one of the other boys, Dean was the one who would talk me into accepting, using words like 'honor', and 'glory'. Unfortunately, none of the adults in the village allowed "my chi made me do it" as a valid excuse, having heard it hundreds of times from other kids. The dull pain of recent loss struck me again as I thought about the past. All of the boys I had gotten into fistfights with and all of the girls I had courted were now dead. There was no solace for me now except Dean, and the beautiful act of revenge I would soon perform. Thinking about all of this made me sick with grief.
It was a little past midday when we caught up to the raider's camp. Looking down upon it from a tall hill, I spent the rest of the day trying to pass the time. I hunted in the woods for rabbits until I had enough to feed a small village, sharpened my sword until it seemed to be able to cut through air itself, and tapped my fingers on a boulder until Dean asked me to stop because it was annoying him. I think he was just as nervous as me though, and it made him even more jittery to see me like that.
At last night fell, and only the dim lights of the moon and stars served to illuminate the world. Autumn, I noted, is not the best time to launch an ambush. I decided to leave my large heavy boots back at our camp on top of the hill, but still the leaves rustled underfoot. I crept forward, my newly sharpened sword drawn and ready. Finally, Kane would pay for the massacre of my village.
As I entered the encampment, Dean pointed out that I had no way of knowing which tent Kane was in, and suggested that I project him further, allowing him to inspect the other tents. Unfortunately, there was the problem of Dean not being able to do harm to anyone, so if he was spotted by someone's Chi who happened to be awake, our cover would be blown. Instead, we would have to go through every tent, killing the raiders if necessary when they woke up.
In the first one, I found only one man. This was odd, considering the number of tents there were. Because there were ten tents, I had concluded before entering any that there must be two or three in each, as otherwise they would not have sufficient numbers to overcome my village's army. Instead I found one sleeping man. Either he was Kane, I decided, or something is very wrong.
"Duncan!" Dean shouted telepathically, "His Chi is waking him up!"
I quickly rushed behind the waking man and held my blade to his neck. With the hand that was not holding my sword, I covered his mouth.
"Tell me where Kane is, or I'll cut you open," I said, the anger of losing everyone I knew evident in my voice. "Scream, and you're dead."
I removed my hand from his mouth, and felt a sudden burst of energy rush through the hand that was holding my sword. At that same instant, I felt the man's hand pushing with extraordinary strength on its handle. The strength Dean was focusing on my hand was just enough to combat the raider's own boost from his Chi, and I held the sword were it was for several seconds. Suddenly, the man twisted out of my grasp, and drew his own sword. He was halfway through shouting for help when my blade spilled his intestines onto the floor of the tent. Rage was pulsing through me, and in that instant, I lost all reason, and charged out of the tent to meet what I expected to be a veritable army. Instead I found seven confused men with assorted weaponry.
They were dressed like barbarians, with clothing made out of what seemed to be the same rough leather as their tents, and were all wielding some jagged piece of spike covered metal. Knowing that if I hesitated they would kill me in an instant, I utilized Dean's helpful burst of power to my legs to lunge forward and slay the first man. He had barely swung his gigantic battle axe before my sword stabbed at his shoulder. He stumbled to the ground screaming. The next two men attacked in unison, and even with the help of my Chi I was struggling. One held a heavy iron mace, and the other stabbed at me with a six foot pike. I was barely surviving, dodging this way and that, ducking blows, and slashing at my adversaries angrily. All of the pain and grief I had felt earlier seemed to be converted into anger, and it fueled my attacks. Finally, I stabbed the man with the mace, and kicking the spear from the other raider's hand, I plunged my sword into his chest, mingling the blood of the two men. It now seemed clear to the other four men who they were supposed to be attacking, and they leaped in for the kill.
Without Dean's efforts in that fight I would have perished in under thirty seconds. Instead, power surged through me like never before. I had wondered earlier how dean was feeling, and now I knew. He was enraged. The anger he felt now flowed through my veins as energy, and I moved like lightning. My blows bent the solid steel axes and swords of my opponents, and I felt no fear. After I had slain three more men, I knocked the weapon from the last man's hand and shoved him to the ground. I positioned one foot on his chest, and pointed my sword at his neck.
"Where is Kane, the raider warlord?!" I demanded furiously.
"He's not here," said the man, a smile beginning to creep on to his face as he made a sudden realization.
"Duncan, you just used all of your energy in that fight, I'm struggling to keep you awake. You'll collapse from fatigue any minute now, so make this quick."
"But I feel fine," I said, confused at how I could possibly be ready to collapse with all of this energy flowing through me.
"As soon as I can't sustain this anymore, you're going to drop, just take my word for it."
"Tell me where he is!" I shouted, realizing that if I didn't get an answer out of him soon I would faint, and never get one.
"You'll never win. You can't just kill Kane, he has a power you don't understand. Go looking for him and he will take you down in a heartbeat."
"Tell me or I'll murder you right here!" I said, panic beginning to set in, as I felt the effects of fatigue and exhaustion. I began to realize that if I fainted, this man would kill me.
"It doesn't look like you have the energy," he gloated, pushing me off of him and preparing to end my life.
"Think again," I said weakly. With one final surge of strength, I ran the raider through on the blade of my sword, and then promptly blacked out.
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