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PostPosted: Wed Mar 08, 2006 9:06 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Zell, try asking doe. Send her a pm. Very Happy

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PostPosted: Thu Mar 09, 2006 12:00 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Zell, please stop spamming this topic. If you continue this thread will be locked.

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PostPosted: Thu Mar 09, 2006 5:59 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

alright i'll stop
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PostPosted: Wed Mar 15, 2006 6:31 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

hey any entries and you'll receive 50 points
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PostPosted: Thu Mar 16, 2006 2:40 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Has anyone actually entered yet?

I don't mind judging. Smile

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PostPosted: Thu Mar 16, 2006 4:43 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hey, I guess I'll enter, here is my poem:


Angelic

arched across the gallows pole the writing of my name,
do not leave the ecstasy of what so long ago-

Listen

the pixies whisper words of warning

to whoever wanders near

turquoise flies and jagged edges

no

do not fear


let me stumble through the bramble of what memories
I cease to to see

Tyger, tyger

burning bright

in the forests of the night


There have been whispers

more then whispers

of my-

treachery-

love-

death.

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PostPosted: Thu Mar 16, 2006 5:50 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

thanks doe the judging starts now
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PostPosted: Mon Mar 20, 2006 3:37 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I very recently posted this poem in the Literary Forums.

Pain Come Softly

Believe me like you did before the rain,
like when with Night we sang the hymn of lost
travail. The science of intent attains
the whims of times and bridges we have crossed.

Engulf me in your heaving soul, to show
that love is thrown between both Heav’n and Hell.
Those days that crawl like moons across the snow
will gaze upon the arms of Life’s farewell.

O pain, O pain, come softly on the day,
and move your whims with pulsing, light concern,
and sing to Peace’s throaty, husky bay
that thunder comes at daylight’s black return.

When finally sentries hear the warrior’s cry,
you seize me and together we will fly.

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PostPosted: Tue Mar 21, 2006 8:42 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

here's my entry:

Your eyes

Your eyes
Are now small and watery,
Bubbling with energy and excitement,
As you take you very first step.
They are pure and innocent-for the first and last time.
They are full of mirth and joy.
You like all others start as a lovable baby.

Your eyes
Are now full of wild mischief,
Jumping with much-wanted fun
As you push off the stairs your baby brother,
They are filled with anything but care.
They are hungry for more similar fun.
You are a promising imp.

Your eyes
Are now darting this way and that,
As you cheat from your best friend’s paper,
They know nothing but the tricks of cheating.
They are cunningly trained to suit.
You are an ever-growing cheat.

Your eyes
Are now wide with fear and anticipation,
Brimming with tension of the nearing task
As you crouch to stab your best friend,
They are bloody and maliciously murderous.
They have no mercy for the person you’re about to expire.
You are a best friend-killer.

Your eyes
Are now glasslike and lifeless,
Reflecting the world without expressions
As you akin to as any chopped off log,
They are static and immortally so.
They show crystal-clearly the coldness you feel,
You are dead.

Your eyes
Are now burning with flames-red and gold,
Mirroring all of your pat sinful deeds
As you stand beside the Devil himself,
They are gleaming with pride as the Devil praises you.
They also regret deeply for not having killed more.
You are in hell.

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PostPosted: Tue Mar 21, 2006 9:54 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

thank you for entering this competion you all receive 50 points the deadline will be 26/3/06
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PostPosted: Sat Mar 25, 2006 9:13 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

ok one more day left hurry or you'll miss out
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PostPosted: Sat Mar 25, 2006 9:46 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

tell me honestly who hasn't received 50 points yet
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PostPosted: Sat Mar 25, 2006 10:36 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

zell stop spamming please, just edit your posts. I have gotten my points.

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PostPosted: Sun Mar 26, 2006 5:20 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

i've got 50 points too.

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PostPosted: Thu Mar 30, 2006 5:54 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

This contest has reached its deadline, can someone please announce the winner?

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