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This thread was created on February 22, 2006
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Myth
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| This is really nice. The 'worthless information' part made him who he is and I can relate to that (I know someone just like that). |
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Leanah
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| Posted: Mon Feb 27, 2006 4:18 pm Post subject: |
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| =D> Nice work! |
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Areida
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| Posted: Tue Feb 28, 2006 1:48 pm Post subject: |
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sarah-- Oh, he is, LOL.
dynasty cow-- thank you for reading! 
bob-- you should read my stuff when you're tired more often; that way I don't have to cringe in fear every time I see your name on the replies for the threads.  You should post the poem about your grandfather. Grandpa's are so great.
Doe-- I'm glad you got that too. Thank you for reading!
Leanah-- Thanks! And welcome to the YWS. I hope you're enjoying it so far. PM me if you need anything, okay?  |
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Araidne
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| Posted: Thu Mar 02, 2006 4:23 pm Post subject: |
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| How sweet! Keep up the good work! |
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Bronco
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| Posted: Fri Mar 03, 2006 1:32 am Post subject: |
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| I love the emotion in this poem. Even without actually seeing your grandfather, I feel almost like I've met him. Good Job! Perhaps a little more rhyme would have been in place, however the mood is still captured perfectly. |
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