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 Posted: Mon Jan 23, 2006 2:43 pm Post subject: Kirsten Dunst, JC Penny, and Punk Rock. |
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These are my three cell art drawings, any tips or tricks would be helpful. (you can see more of my drawings at http://zgirldiva.deviantart.com)
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| Posted: Mon Jan 23, 2006 3:27 pm Post subject: |
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I like your smooth lack of black line coloring.
Though Ill have to say number 2 is the best one.
On number one the copy and pasted white highlights look bad, just go back and hand do them instead of being lazy.
Also the face is a pretty 3d piece of work, something you didn't portray. Heavier shading around the nose and cheeks will help define this.
Just shade half the face.
Add in some more colors or shades or something.
I like the pose on the second one. However the feet are too big, whether with perspective or not.
You have shades, but no highlights?
The last one is my least favorite. Its mainly the face. Its so flat looking and the anime eyes throws it off. Its mainly the face but the black shorts could use some more grey and white.
You make me want to color with not black lines. |
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| Posted: Mon Jan 23, 2006 9:48 pm Post subject: |
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| thanks for the tips! |
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| Posted: Mon Jan 23, 2006 11:49 pm Post subject: |
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The second is my favourite too. The third one's body is totally out of proportion to the head, but the second one is really good. Nice work on that one.  |
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| Posted: Tue Jan 24, 2006 1:32 am Post subject: |
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| wow, those are some really good pictures, i like the first and second one best, but as the other people said the third one is out of proportion, and the white streaks on the first one are a little out of place, and degrades the picture. otherwise great job, and keep doing more of em. |
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| Posted: Tue Jan 24, 2006 1:48 am Post subject: |
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| Thank you! I think the first and second are my favorites too! |
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| Posted: Tue Jan 24, 2006 10:46 am Post subject: |
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| I really like the second one, its really well done expect you can't see her arm because the background is the same colour! |
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| Posted: Tue Jan 24, 2006 11:17 pm Post subject: |
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BG = White
Arm = Dulled Yellow |
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| Posted: Wed Jan 25, 2006 1:35 pm Post subject: |
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| Alright I only noticed that now but it still looks white. |
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| Posted: Wed Feb 15, 2006 8:00 pm Post subject: |
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| I like the one of kirsten dunst you got her quirkiness. |
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| Posted: Sat Feb 18, 2006 8:03 pm Post subject: |
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| Thank You! |
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| Posted: Sat Mar 04, 2006 11:07 pm Post subject: |
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| thats brilliant got any other art lol i liked the third one more it was very intresting second fav was the first one then the last fav was of course is the second one |
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| Posted: Tue Mar 14, 2006 10:41 pm Post subject: |
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thanks so much!
yeah actually, the link to my art website is at the top of my first post! |
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| Posted: Sat Mar 25, 2006 3:44 am Post subject: |
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| What medium did you use? |
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| Posted: Sat Mar 25, 2006 7:43 am Post subject: |
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| I like them all, the second one is the best, I think. The third one could use fixing up. |
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