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Hi there! So here's my most recent parody. Not sure if I'll do another one anytime soon. Trying to focus on my other projects. Or not. Oh well, here it is. I'm having troubles with a couple lines in the bridge. suggestions?


Muh muh muh muuh 5X

verse 1:
I would like a grande mocha frappuccino please
hold the whip, I cannot take those extra calories
coffee is the best thing used to study through the night
and who’s to say that coffee’s not an afternoon delight?!
OOOooOOOOOoooooOOOOoo
I like it hot; drink coffee a lot
OOOoooOOOoooOOoooOo
I like it hot; drink coffee a lot

chorus:
I need my
I need my
Oh yes, I need my coffee break
(she has got to find a Starbucks)
I need my
I need my
Oh yes, I need my coffee break
(she has got to find a Starbucks)

C-c-c-coffee break c-c-coffee break
Muh muh muh muuh
C-c-c-coffee break c-c-coffee break
muh muh muh muuh

verse 2:
make my coffee black as strong as it can go
Then later I’ll have a latte that is topped with extra foam.(I love it)
poetry slams are not the same without a mug
and offices the way those people drink it’s by the jug
OoOOOOOOOooooOOooo
I like it hot, drink coffee a lot
OooooOOOooooooOOOo
I like it hot, drink coffee a lot.

repeat chorus

c-c-c-coffee break, c-c-coffee break
muh muh muh muh
c-c-c-coffee break, c-c-coffee break
muh muh muh muh
muh muh muh muh
muh muh muh muh

bridge:
I’m gonna take a chocolate scone
for here or home
maybe a muffin, I ain’t bluffin
I need some grub to go with my coffee in the morning


Just like a girl who is too weary
without my coffee I am scary .
Just promise me, just promise me
you’ll give me this latte for free.

repeat chorus 3X

and c-c-c-coffee break it to the end!!!!!!!!

-applauds-

100% Brilliance!

Awesome!

Haha, this is hilarious. *liked

This was so awesome. hahahah I love it!

LOL Loved it! I almost ROFL! hahaha... superb work!

I really liked this. I usually don't like parodies because they seem so pointless and it's too much like a mockery of someone else's work, but I don't even care right now. This really made me laugh.

Sorry I can't help you with the bridge, but I didn't see any major problems with it.

THIS WAS GREAT!
laughed my head off and sang along!
Great stuff
I also liked your Tik Tok parody!
~Tamara
x

YOU!
You have got to be one of the best Parody writers on the face of the planet!! This was hilarious!! The best part is that I know Poker Face quite well and I can't stand the song! You made my life soooo much better! Whenever I hear that song on the radio, I'll just sing this instead
Keep doing what you do! And maybe PM me with your next one if it isn't too much of a bother?
*Applauds*

This was awesome! Great job!

Once again you have created another master piece! *Hits like button.*

I. Love. You. Where. Did. You. get. This.

Thanks ya'll for the comments! I suppose I'll just have to live with the bridge for now, but don't be surprised if I edit it. @Thegirlwholived, I wrote it...

I can't stop laughing! I loved everything from beginning until the end. It was funny! Make more parodies, please! hehehe. I really loved the chorus part!

Keep up the good work!

Peace out!

By the way, congratulations to have your work featured. You just made my day.

Awesome! I knew this was going to be featured as soon as I saw this.
They lyrics are hilarious, and they all fit perfectly with the song. Where do you get your ideas, lol? When Tik Tok got stuck in my head a day ago, the song had your pirate lyrics.
~KD