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If this was a book, would you read it?

Yes

25%

[ 1 ]

[ 0 ]

Not sure

75%

[ 3 ]

Total Votes : 4

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Age: 15
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Country: England
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Posted: Sat May 24, 2008 10:26 pm Post subject: :D

This story is really good! I would try to think of something to nitpick about but everyone's pretty much summed it up already! Although I do want to know where her book and clothes went. Perhaps explain what the other convicts think of her bringing the book and clothes giving you a reason for why they knicked them? Other than that tiny little detail, a very unique and solid plot! Keep writing! x

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